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Light that lights all lights judged 1/1/2025/ Title changed after contest.

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In God's Light

 “we look for that light eternal  that does not come and go 
the screen upon which life plays cognised in staid stillness slow” - 
                         the contest sponsor's quote.

People these days can seem
to always be on the go.
If our lives were televised,
what about us would folks know?

People might not be aware
of the light on God’s big screen,
but even deeds in darkness done
are by the angels seen.

If we could only slow things down
and think of things we’ve done,
we could in a moment be
knowing actions we must shun.

How we can improve ourselves
we ought to contemplate,
and darkness from the good Lord’s light
we then can separate.

In evil hearts, the light of God
will not there abide.
Let yourselves not into
the realm of darkness slide.

God’s light of love won’t vanish.
It is charity divine.
Dwell inside it knowing
evermore that it will shine.
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Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 1:25 PM
I like this winner. Way to go. Congratulations on your name being on the winners' list. Sara K
Hawley Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win in this 2nd chance contest. I agree with your message in this poem. Great job.
Beaufort Avatar
December 17, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Andrea, a great message here. We should treat our fellow earth dwellers and nature itself with some kindness and respect. It all comes back to us in the end. Smiles.
Hind Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 2:55 PM
Lovely - and inspiring <3
Proxenos Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 1:46 AM
God has the brightest of bright lights at the entrance of his home to heaven, and he is on call 24/7. As for us humanity ought to slo3mw down where are rushing to and for whatwe should be thankful for all .we have got and concentrate more on the divine path to God brigh light home in heavent Blessings dear friend Jennifer.
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December 13, 2024 at 9:44 AM
Oh your words, dear beautiful Andrea! They are just so profound and spiritually rich, expressing a deep essence of emotions wherein, the light of the divine possesses all healing powers and glory. So stunningly you've described that in a powerful manner which makes the readers feel the cosmic caress of Almighty. The wishes of your kind heart can really be felt here, dear soul ~ "but even deeds in darkness done are by the angels seen" So true! And that ending! Wonderful ~ best wishes to you, always.
Read Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Hi Andrea, you've written a poem that lights up the true meaning of God's light. xx
Poteet Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 8:20 PM
Great response to the line of inquiry. You have emphasized the eternal nature of Almighty God to perfection. And another point, well stated, is the screen of human minds and hearts which are determined to comprehend what God is all about - what He is up to within us…no matter how long it takes. A superb spiritual piece which takes more than one read to digest. Thumbs up.
Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 10:50 PM
Thanks so much. I try really hard with his lines of inquiry and it's not usually very easy!
Hawley Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 7:46 PM
There is a lot of food for thought in that poem of yours. Good luck in the contest.
Tor Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 3:30 PM
Such a wonderful and beautiful piece Andrea really enjoyed reading. God bless you...
Martin Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 6:02 AM
Andrea, I've been away for quite a while and could not be happier to have found you and your spirit-filled & uplifting poetry once again. This one is truly an eye/head/heart opening piece of beauty and wisdom. Blessings to you & yours.
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December 11, 2024 at 11:13 PM
Dear sweet andrea, you have a beautiful heart and one that spreads light to all too. I love the way youv interpreted the line of enquiry and delivered a poem that is so profound and soulful! Powerful really! I especially love the lines “In evil hearts, the light of God will not there abide. Let yourselves not into the realm of darkness slide.” So true and i hope many wouldnt slide into the realm of darkness. Pleasure reading this poem. Best wishes
Buhagiar Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 10:23 PM
There are many mysteries in life which we cannot understand. We need faith which is in itself light. Hugs.
George Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 9:35 PM
"but even deeds in darkness done are by the angels seen." I do believe that. So, I wish to do deeds that are only suitable for the day. "Let yourselves not into the realm of darkness slide." Great warning. Well expressed!
Rolland Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 3:48 PM
sure there is eternal light in universe, thanks for sharing thoughtful poem Andrea
Cunningham Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 2:04 PM
We all make mistakes as we go through life but learning from them makes us a better person. Well written Andrea and good luck in the contest. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 1:07 PM
God's love is the light that lights the world every minute of every day. I like the faith-based work. reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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