In God's Eyes

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Imagine, if you can, that God is a cloud He wakes you from sleep with a silver display a shining example of grace under doubt and drifts in the sun, taking fear from our hearts He treasures our world from His own point of view Astonishes us with wisdom so true With the rush of wind, He brushes my face so I'll hear every bird, feel every embrace God, with His arms, surrounds me in love I can feel reassured He is watching above I won't drift all alone, but have new inner peace I will open my heart and dream of new things The earth could be peaceful, as never before Where confidence reigns along every shore Above, me the sun will be ever warm The world would resolve all the hurts of the day I can weave a new song, lean into His arms and sail to the music, straight out of the gray Feeling God and His presence, are like wings of a dove From a place in the sunlight, that is shining with love
____________________________________ For Contest "His All Seeing Eye" Sponsored by Mystic Rose 6/16/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/23/2015 2:51:00 AM
Wow! This poem is really wonderful and inspirational. Congrats, Carrie. God bless!
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Date: 6/18/2015 6:22:00 PM
Inspirational write Carrie - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/18/2015 6:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this fine poem my friend. A7 "Above, me the sun will be ever warm The world would resolve all the hurts of the day I can weave a new song, lean into His arms and sail to the music, straight out of the gray"
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Date: 6/18/2015 12:46:00 PM
Carrie. Congratulations in Mystic Rose's contest **SKAT**
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Date: 6/18/2015 9:29:00 AM
Hi, Carrie, I enjoyed your inspirational poem and loved the way you closed your poem. Congrats on your win. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 6/18/2015 12:10:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Carrie!
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:49:00 PM
Carrie, :) Congratulations on your win. Love LINDA
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Date: 6/17/2015 3:14:00 AM
Beautiful write
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Date: 6/16/2015 8:05:00 PM
Such a beautiful Psalm to our Heavenly Father dear poet ! TY for such inspiration ! Hope ya didn't mind the peek into your poetic world Carrie. Have a blessed week.............much love, james
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/16/2015 8:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, James ! :) Wishing you the best as well ! :)
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