In Full Bloom

twenty yards distance
oh God, the sight, scent and sound
closer now, closer
let the droning, drowsy hum
of honey bees drift softly...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 12:32 PM
- Congratulation on your winning poem - A great poem, Tim! - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:25 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support **SKAT LOVE**
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Thanks for drawing my attention to this one, Tim, So sorry it did not get entered into my contest. I would have placed it for sure!! This is so pretty and the honey bees' hum is such a great symbolism for spring. Not many people did spring. Your poem rocks!!!
Ryerson Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Thanks!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 2:07 AM
Without the the title and last line I can reflect on two thoughts soft soft write and lil intriguing...:) God bless you Tim..:) Olive Eloisa
Manassian Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 4:32 AM
Beautiful in every way, Tim...Just...like a Spring lullaby. I'm moved. Wonderful, partner....Partners in crime? ;)
A   Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 7:14 PM
Hello Tim, a lovely view. Spring sounds good about now... Sounds like sweet music... Wishing you luck in Andrea's contest... I always have your back... :) Linda
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