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twenty yards distance oh God, the sight, scent and sound closer now, closer let the droning, drowsy hum of honey bees drift softly...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/21/2015 12:32:00 PM
- Congratulation on your winning poem - A great poem, Tim! - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:25:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support **SKAT LOVE**
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Date: 7/1/2014 3:18:00 PM
Thanks for drawing my attention to this one, Tim, So sorry it did not get entered into my contest. I would have placed it for sure!! This is so pretty and the honey bees' hum is such a great symbolism for spring. Not many people did spring. Your poem rocks!!!
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/1/2014 3:26:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 6/26/2014 2:07:00 AM
Without the the title and last line I can reflect on two thoughts soft soft write and lil intriguing...:) God bless you Tim..:) Olive Eloisa
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Date: 6/25/2014 4:32:00 AM
Beautiful in every way, Tim...Just...like a Spring lullaby. I'm moved. Wonderful, partner....Partners in crime? ;)
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Date: 6/24/2014 7:14:00 PM
Hello Tim, a lovely view. Spring sounds good about now... Sounds like sweet music... Wishing you luck in Andrea's contest... I always have your back... :) Linda
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