In Formation

in formation northbound geese ~ shadows racing posted on June 11, 2019

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Alkas Poetry

Date: 6/14/2019 3:43:00 PM

A fast show but that in the imagination stays ... salute Line alkas

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/14/2019 3:58:00 PM

Thanks, Alkas, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/14/2019 2:56:00 PM

you penned this one nicely! It comes to life for the reader....i stop at a little park almost daily and watch the geese, recently they had young ones with them! enjoyed the read

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/14/2019 3:59:00 PM

What a lovely outing for you, Sandra. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/12/2019 8:45:00 PM

Nice information here. Splendid haiku. ~ Honk, honk

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/12/2019 9:24:00 PM

LOL thanks for the informative comment, Gershon.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/12/2019 12:51:00 AM

It is interesting to see the geese close up and personal. They use the roof of my office as a landing pad. When they fly off the roof I get to see their bottoms up close and personal as they fly off the edge. Thanks for the reminder.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/12/2019 8:35:00 AM

LOL close encounters of another kind.

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/11/2019 2:20:00 PM

An envied sight as our bright sun causes our birds to hide in our thick undergrowth forests' and fly with the same pattern as you've succinctly detailed, yet low be their hoverance just a slight above the treetops, mostly too low for eyes to witness Line, Aloha William (apologizing for my hot aired speech)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/11/2019 3:13:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and peek into the Hawaiian scene, William.