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In Flight

Love has got you feeling like you're floating in the air On a magic carpet ride, eyes open wide, hanging on tight One kiss was all it took to send you there Sent you up in the clouds on streetcar number nine Sent you flying in the sky, like a gush of oil from a gold mine Got your heart zooming in flight; go rest your head on her heart, take a cool journey in the heat of the night Sheer delight, your heart's in flight Baby said everything was peachy keen alright Love has got you feeling like you're cruising on a tropical crosswind In a pleasure hot air balloon, eyes shut closed, hanging on loose One kiss took you where you had never been Sent you up in the clouds on streetcar number nine Sent you flying in the sky, like you struck oil in a gold mine Got your heart soaring in flight, sheer open arm delight Sunburst showers of the morning, rains love on you in the middle of the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/17/2016 8:56:00 PM
This fun write was brisk, perky and I think would be a catchy 'lil song. I was entertained, even the delivery was entertaining ... CayCay
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Date: 12/16/2016 3:04:00 AM
"like a gush of oil from a gold mine" - what a great line. The heroin of new love, man, some of us can't resist trying for it, over and over.
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Date: 12/15/2016 7:14:00 PM
Very nice and romantic lyric poem Freddie; I can definitely imagine these words put to a tune!:)
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Date: 12/15/2016 11:36:00 AM
Beautifully crafted Freddie. I can hear a melody as I read and it seems to be coming from my heart. Just gotta love a love song.
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Date: 12/15/2016 8:52:00 AM
Hi Freddie, You've penned such a beautiful and romantic song. I enjoyed what I heard. It has a nice catchy chorus that I could just imagine being played on the radio. It would most definitely be in my song collection because of it's good lyrics and the fact that it's a love song. Well done. A without a doubt seven and a fave:-) Alexis
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