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not "Baby," but he looked exactly like this!

In Doggie Heaven

A "woof! woof!" shout-out
           goes out to a dearly departed
                    four-legged pooch
           running free in doggie heaven!

      An energetic, playful people-pleaser
                    that belonged to
         a friend and old neighbor of mine
               What a personality had he!

            He was taught so many tricks:
                  He barked "Woof! Woof!" 
                      when told to "speak."
              He knew how to sit and stay,

              how to roll over, even how to
                  hi-five and shake hands.
        He loved getting his belly rubbed, too!
               A funny, intelligent, curious,

              not to mention, affectionate...
                       pit bull named "Baby"
              He made me laugh one time
               chewing on his squeaky toy...

           for what seemed like an eternity!
              I'll never forget him; he loved
              the treats I used to bring him.
             He really liked me and used to...

                      lick me to death 
                 every time I petted him!
              He changed my perception
                     of pit bulls forever!

                   Rest in peace, "Baby"(2007-2018)



All Pets Go To Heaven Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Constance La  France
Date written: 08/10/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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La France Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 9:46 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my All Pets Go To Heaven Challenge with this emotional write, it touched my heart, a FAV for me - Constance
Ibeh Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Constance:-) I really appreciate the congratulations and FAV! Most obliged.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 5:19 PM
Pitties can be the sweetest pooches! Statistically it’s the northern spitz types (least removed from the wolf & my fave) that have bitten and killed more people than the notorious pit bull terrier. They are about the people pleaserest pups out there ;), charming poem, congratulations for your win! xomo
Ibeh Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:50 PM
I totally agree, pit bulls are indeed sweet, wonderful dogs. Too bad some people don't know to handle them. They need to be trained, socialized and well-cared for to prevent aggressiveness. Thanks for the comments and congrats, Pidge:-)
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 4:44 AM
- "lick me to death" :))) ... - I know how it feels :))) ... congratulations on your top win, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 9:43 AM
It's nothin' but pure love! Thank you very much indeed, Anne-Lise:-)
Kauffman Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Smiles and tears all at the same time for both you and "Baby." Wonderfully crafted story, Edward. Congratulations on your win.
Ibeh Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 3:27 AM
Thank you very much, Sam:-) Blessings to you, my friend!
Messina Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 3:26 AM
Excellent write, Edward. I'm sure "Baby" loved you as well. I hope all is well with you and your family my good friend. Best of luck in the contest! Charlie
Ibeh Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 2:07 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie:-) I get sad thinking about him sometimes. Cancer took him, but he'll always be in my heart. Stay well and safe, my friend!
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