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In Desolation She Stands

In Desolation She Stands She stands in her desolation her wicked life a vile desecration dying victims stink of her perfume sacrifice and pain fill up her room. Hate and sin her sole wish madness sits in her left hand blackened blood covers each breast she tortures , her victims never rest. Scars lace around her eyes dark hair flows with contempt pain invades with her loud cry she laughs as innocent children die. Eyes have seen such misery ripping living bodies apart her lusting flesh the fatal lure in her web, death is the only cure. Courageous victims fight back with fury at being so deceived she guts them with renewed delight as evil eyes watch the scene at night. She stand desolate awaiting her nightly feast smell of rotten flesh in her teeth her foot-claws anchored in hell beneath. She stands defiant lusting for putrid blood screams exciting her rancid ardor as she slashes deeper and harder. Valiant heroes are her prey she that shuns light of bright day greater their fame more she glows bloody ripping apart sells her shows. None stopped her blood lust every night-feast a new victim dies even courage lacks the deep power to defeat, to end forever her darkest hour. She desires ever bigger feasts as she increases her lusting traps putrid blood and rotten flesh stain her songs of misery, torture and pain. Engulfed in vile darkness eating only honor stands a chance of beating This desolation monster at its wicked game By refusing to ever again utter its vile name. 1/30/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/7/2015 12:05:00 AM
What a terrifying creature she must be... Your vivid descriptions really bring her darkness to life... An excellent poem, my friend! Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 11/1/2015 10:43:00 AM
Robert, Congrats on your Halloween win, hope you had a wonderful one. SKAT love
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Date: 10/29/2015 7:46:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win
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Date: 10/27/2015 11:33:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Robert! Thnx for ur kind visit to my page!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/28/2015 7:56:00 AM
Thanks my friend, your poem was a great write!
Date: 10/27/2015 2:08:00 PM
Robert, :) Congratulations on your Good Old Halloween Poem. Had fun reading every entry. Stop by my latest blog "The Locked Room" in references to this contest if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~The Poet Destroyer~
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/28/2015 7:56:00 AM
Thanks PD, really enjoyed writing for this one! I see that you had a lot of fine poems entered too after my reading and congratulating every winner.... Always a pleasure to write for your contests.
Date: 1/31/2015 9:20:00 PM
Thank you Jan.. I lived a bit of it as the devil that inspired the write was my wife back then. I have no doubt that others have had a spouse that was only a step above a demon but trust me, you can not comprehend the true scope of it unless you've experienced it first-hand. Yet life has hope and thus goes on if one can escape from such a situation. I was blessed to have escaped ...
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Date: 1/31/2015 7:18:00 PM
Such vivid deep dark imagery Robert I found it a compelling read from start to finish - now I feel chilled! a 7 from me:-)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/31/2015 9:20:00 PM
Thank you Jan.. I lived a bit of it as the devil that inspired the write was my wife back then. I have no doubt that others have had a spouse that was only a step above a demon but trust me, you can not comprehend the true scope of it unless you've experienced it first-hand. Yet life has hope and thus goes on if one can escape from such a situation. I was blessed to have escaped ...

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