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In Death We Think

Close your eyes within this eternal sleep Envision such a beautiful melancholy life Rejoice and laugh, smile wide as you weep Leaving behind four kids and your wife Ignore the music playing to remind you of grief Remember how quiet it is in death all alone Impulsively thought it would bring me relief Stepping off the curb into the impact zone So cold now here in this bed of all eternity I wonder how my wife will keep warm at night Dry mouthed but it's life for which I'm thirsty If this is Heaven then it's all black nothing white Funny that in death you never actually sleep Praying to the Lord for my soul to keep... Written for Contest: Poem about Death 05/15/18 Theme: This Eternal Sleep/Hosted by: Broken Wings Placed 4th in Contest Results

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Date: 6/2/2018 9:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Brian. Well done.
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/29/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/19/2018 10:47:00 PM
Brian, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write, well done ~
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/20/2018 4:46:00 AM
Thank you I enjoy the challenges in your contests
Date: 5/19/2018 11:59:00 AM
Oh my. A compelling read for me. Congratulations on your win with this unique poem about death.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/19/2018 6:38:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 5/18/2018 2:32:00 PM
I found your reading lines so emotional Brian especially the third stanza, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/19/2018 12:19:00 AM
Thank you Jan as always
Date: 5/18/2018 12:31:00 PM
- A poem about death represent the emotional ... we have all death in wait   - That's how it's always been, but still difficult - Congratulations on your 4th place in the contest, Brian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/19/2018 12:19:00 AM
Thank you and you are correct my dear

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