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In Dark Isolated Places

the rain is pounding on well-hidden mounds of dirt I can imagine the sounds of ghostly cries in dark, isolated places

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Skat A

Date: 9/1/2015 11:36:00 PM

Andrea,, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT

Mark Woods

Date: 9/1/2015 1:39:00 AM

Cool twist in the theme, love what you've done. Never any doubt that this would do well.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/1/2015 12:41:00 AM

Wonderful take Andrea with this lovely tanka n big congrats on great win!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/31/2015 10:06:00 PM

Wonderful write a. 7 congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/31/2015 4:08:00 PM

Shivers of Halloween in this one !! Congrats to you, Andrea !! (It won't be long now !!)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2015 12:11:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/31/2015 11:37:00 AM

Wow, Andrea...hadn't read this before, but it gave me chills just now. So few words, but so very powerful in all that's conveyed. Congratulations on your big win! Sandra

Daver Austin

Date: 8/30/2015 11:05:00 AM

Those "well hidden mounds of dirt" with bony hands thrusting up or a shallow buried vampire's coffin - just a few of the horrible images this wonderful creepy poem brings up. OOOOHHHHH WOOOOOOOOOOO. Love, daver

Paul Callus

Date: 8/28/2015 6:15:00 PM

You create a dark, ghostly atmosphere by the use of imagery which can also be taken as being metaphorical. Could also be evil spirits pounding at our innermost concealed dark secrets #7 // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 8/31/2015 11:38:00 AM

Back with deserved congratulations, Andrea!!

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/28/2015 5:31:00 PM

Great imagery in just a few, well chosen words, Andrea! I enjoyed this :)

Jennifer Walker

Date: 8/28/2015 3:35:00 PM

Dark, powerful pen.

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/28/2015 11:55:00 AM

Could be interpreted as souls of those who died crying out for justice or those who are buried alive. Eerie and powerful images you've captured in a tanka. Way to go, Andie!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/28/2015 5:22:00 PM

that is it exactly. But they were not necessarily buried alive. there have become too many of these places in our world today.

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/28/2015 9:36:00 AM

The shell of dark that surrounds the author’s words acts as a cocoon protecting her from the words. Emile.

James Peranteau

Date: 8/28/2015 8:41:00 AM

How creeeeepy is this Andrea....wooosh....my .. life like dear poet. Have a beautiful weekend Andrea...much love,

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/28/2015 4:53:00 AM

Yeah the true essence to the theme Andrea!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/28/2015 3:55:00 AM

I don't like dark....but if I did...this would be the icing on the cake. Hugs...

April Walter Skyy

Date: 8/28/2015 12:50:00 AM

Nice writing. Short and to the point. I hope you will stop pass sometime and check out some of my writing. I think you would enjoy "Forbidden Love" and "Moonlight. I hope to see you there. Have a good night!!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/27/2015 11:44:00 PM

I like, I like! :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/27/2015 11:38:00 PM

Eerie feeling to this poem. Very evocative! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

James Inman

Date: 8/27/2015 9:31:00 PM

Very good ominous write, Andrea. I really like it. Don't know if you got my SoupMail

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/27/2015 8:43:00 PM

Andrea, as always this a well written dark write. God job! Best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Jill Spagnola

Date: 8/27/2015 6:07:00 PM

This piece touched all my senses! Your work cast an awesome tone :), jill

Joseph May

Date: 8/27/2015 5:57:00 PM

I like the spooky imagery in this piece Andrea...nicely penned..

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/27/2015 5:56:00 PM

I see a lot of potential in this post, wished for the rest of the story..great opening lines for a longer write..

Judy Konos

Date: 8/27/2015 4:48:00 PM

Andrea, am I to understand that you will soon be directing Warner Bros. motion picture, 'Isolated'? Certainly sounds like it from this movie trailer.....