In Candle Light

I cannot stop writing poetry of a blue pen
As you told me warmly you love true pen

When your azure guitar do not bloom out
I collect puffs of cloud and try a new pen

Please don’t leave an apple of my dream
What will then do that mountain dew pen

All my jasmine open up when you come
At your lattice, before my belle view pen

Lyrics in your sweet flute I heard all night
The moon stood beside my love-you pen

Night sits quiet in the amber candle light 
Nazuk is happy with his crimson hue pen

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04/02/2017
Naazuk is the pen name of the Shaa'ir
i.e. poet .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Salehi Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 2:03 AM
Wonderful Ghazal Probir....
Gupta Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 12:27 PM
Thank you ...
Robinson Jr. Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 1:44 PM
Such a lovely, harmonious poem, Probir. It made me smile, because I thought about my favorite pen. You are so gifted my friend. A gem of a poem. Love always.
Gupta Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 7:18 AM
Thank you ...
La France Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 8:07 PM
Probir congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write ~
Gupta Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Thank you so much, Constance ... It is a great pleasure to write on your themes ...
Kamble Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Wonderfully penned!!!!
Gupta Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 7:15 AM
Thank you ...
Medders Tobechi Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 12:04 AM
Magnificent. Love the Ghazal. If it's in a contest, it's a winner. Good luck.
Gupta Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 7:16 AM
Thank you ...
Kannan Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 10:49 PM
Beautiful Ghazal... Love this...
Gupta Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 12:32 AM
Thank you ...
Callus Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 1:21 PM
I have never tried the Ghazal form, Probir, so it looks like you are more daring than I am!! Most of my work is written late at night, and, yes, most of us use different pens for different moods! Of course...the real secret is the ink:) Regards // paul
Gupta Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 12:35 AM
Beautifully served ! ...
Evangelista Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 10:17 PM
great lines ^^ I wonder now how far my penning goes hehhehe I love the thought.
Gupta Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 10:49 PM
It will go as far as you focus ... Thank you for loving the thought ...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 2:31 PM
I have so many things to learn but I am only ...72 so I have time! Haha! Great writing my friend, Probir!
Gupta Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Me too ... older than you ... and thank you ...
Onclaud Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:11 AM
fascinatingly worded; such a glittering pen, probir!..huggs
Gupta Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 8:40 PM
Thank you ...
Herlihy Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Poets treasure their pens. Your pens change colors. Interesting. JH
Gupta Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 8:04 AM
How can poems change colour if a poet's pen is monochrome ... A pen is a thought ... Fills the vacuum with words ... Comes up a new moon ...
Ranahan Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 7:07 AM
my pen is smiling
Gupta Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 7:54 AM
May the smile broaden ... Encouraging further Ghazals ...
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