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In Candle Light

I cannot stop writing poetry of a blue pen As you told me warmly you love true pen When your azure guitar do not bloom out I collect puffs of cloud and try a new pen Please don’t leave an apple of my dream What will then do that mountain dew pen All my jasmine open up when you come At your lattice, before my belle view pen Lyrics in your sweet flute I heard all night The moon stood beside my love-you pen Night sits quiet in the amber candle light Nazuk is happy with his crimson hue pen _____________________________________ 04/02/2017 Naazuk is the pen name of the Shaa'ir i.e. poet .

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Date: 5/27/2017 2:03:00 AM
Wonderful Ghazal Probir....
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Date: 5/27/2017 12:27:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/14/2017 1:44:00 PM
Such a lovely, harmonious poem, Probir. It made me smile, because I thought about my favorite pen. You are so gifted my friend. A gem of a poem. Love always.
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Date: 2/15/2017 7:18:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/11/2017 8:07:00 PM
Probir congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write ~
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Date: 2/11/2017 10:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance ... It is a great pleasure to write on your themes ...
Date: 2/8/2017 6:56:00 AM
Wonderfully penned!!!!
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Date: 2/8/2017 7:15:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/8/2017 12:04:00 AM
Magnificent. Love the Ghazal. If it's in a contest, it's a winner. Good luck.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/8/2017 7:16:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/5/2017 10:49:00 PM
Beautiful Ghazal... Love this...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/6/2017 12:32:00 AM
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Date: 2/5/2017 1:21:00 PM
I have never tried the Ghazal form, Probir, so it looks like you are more daring than I am!! Most of my work is written late at night, and, yes, most of us use different pens for different moods! Of course...the real secret is the ink:) Regards // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/6/2017 12:35:00 AM
Beautifully served ! ...
Date: 2/4/2017 10:17:00 PM
great lines ^^ I wonder now how far my penning goes hehhehe I love the thought.
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Date: 2/4/2017 10:49:00 PM
It will go as far as you focus ... Thank you for loving the thought ...
Date: 2/4/2017 2:31:00 PM
I have so many things to learn but I am only ...72 so I have time! Haha! Great writing my friend, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/4/2017 8:39:00 PM
Me too ... older than you ... and thank you ...
Date: 2/4/2017 11:11:00 AM
fascinatingly worded; such a glittering pen, probir!..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/4/2017 8:40:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/4/2017 7:49:00 AM
Poets treasure their pens. Your pens change colors. Interesting. JH
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/4/2017 8:04:00 AM
How can poems change colour if a poet's pen is monochrome ... A pen is a thought ... Fills the vacuum with words ... Comes up a new moon ...
Date: 2/4/2017 7:07:00 AM
my pen is smiling
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/4/2017 7:54:00 AM
May the smile broaden ... Encouraging further Ghazals ...

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