Joseph May Poet Tail-rhyme

In Blissful Skies

A distant star in twinkling gleam
 Twinkles thoughts in which I deem
  Your starry eyes

 I'll travel now to planets far
 In dreams that take me where you are
 In blissful skies

 Dawn will find you in my arms
 And bring to me all your charms
 My sweet sunrise

 5-28-2020
 Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Aditi Mishra July 7, 2020 at 4:36 AM A really dreamy delightful write Joseph. Your starry muse lights up my heart. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :)

Funom Makama June 8, 2020 at 8:47 PM Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!

Gordon Mcconnell June 6, 2020 at 9:15 AM Such a lovely pen Joseph, so full of romantic love and gracious insight. Blessings,Gordon

Constance La France June 3, 2020 at 12:41 PM Joseph, your poem is lovely and dreamy and full of love, well done _Constance

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2020 at 5:31 PM I was wondering about this form, not having done it in a while and it's VERY clear the pattern of it from the succinct beautiful way you carried it out, Joseph.

Jennifer Proxenos May 31, 2020 at 8:42 AM This is certainly a win my friend - so well penned Joseph. Blessings, Jennifer.

Harry Horsman May 30, 2020 at 12:34 AM Oh i love this, a wonderful delightful love poem...fresh air to me reading this, after all the things going on in the world today...

Joanna Daniel May 29, 2020 at 9:06 AM I love this romantic write, Joseph:) very well writ:) Joseph May May 29, 2020 at 9:48 AM Thank you Jo

Brandy Nicole May 28, 2020 at 10:17 PM "Your starry eyes, my sweet sunrise" Oh my!! This is so beautiful and romantic. Dreamy. Your thoughts make my heart flutter. A keeper for me. :) Brandy Joseph May May 29, 2020 at 9:47 AM Thank you Brandy, Glad you like it thanks for making it a keeper

Judy Ball May 28, 2020 at 5:59 PM Lovely Joseph. Beautifully done in perfect rhyme and rhythm. God Bless and stay well my friend. JB Joseph May May 29, 2020 at 9:47 AM Thank you Judy

Tom Cunningham May 28, 2020 at 12:44 PM A very romantic verse Joseph, it just bounces along, good luck in the contest. Tom Joseph May May 29, 2020 at 9:42 AM Thank you Tom

Vijay Pandit May 28, 2020 at 8:55 AM Enjoyed the melody and splendid imagery--all the best, Joseph. Joseph May May 28, 2020 at 9:24 AM Thank you Vijay

Regina Mcintosh May 28, 2020 at 8:51 AM A wonderful poem and entry. I wish you all the best for a win. Blessings and love sent your way ~ Gina Joseph May May 28, 2020 at 9:23 AM Thank you Gina, Peace and Blessings to you..