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In Blissful Skies

A distant star in twinkling gleam Twinkles thoughts in which I deem Your starry eyes I'll travel now to planets far In dreams that take me where you are In blissful skies Dawn will find you in my arms And bring to me all your charms My sweet sunrise 5-28-2020 Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/7/2020 4:36:00 AM

A really dreamy delightful write Joseph. Your starry muse lights up my heart. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :)

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 8:47:00 PM

Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/6/2020 9:15:00 AM

Such a lovely pen Joseph, so full of romantic love and gracious insight. Blessings,Gordon

Constance La France

Date: 6/3/2020 12:41:00 PM

Joseph, your poem is lovely and dreamy and full of love, well done _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2020 5:31:00 PM

I was wondering about this form, not having done it in a while and it's VERY clear the pattern of it from the succinct beautiful way you carried it out, Joseph.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/31/2020 8:42:00 AM

This is certainly a win my friend - so well penned Joseph. Blessings, Jennifer.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/30/2020 12:34:00 AM

Oh i love this, a wonderful delightful love poem...fresh air to me reading this, after all the things going on in the world today...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/29/2020 9:06:00 AM

I love this romantic write, Joseph:) very well writ:)

Joseph May
Date: 5/29/2020 9:48:00 AM

Thank you Jo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/28/2020 10:17:00 PM

"Your starry eyes, my sweet sunrise" Oh my!! This is so beautiful and romantic. Dreamy. Your thoughts make my heart flutter. A keeper for me. :) Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 5/29/2020 9:47:00 AM

Thank you Brandy, Glad you like it thanks for making it a keeper