In Between Bricks and Mortor

Sand water air natural parts of the earth,
making homes and many giving birth,
evolving rapidly over the years,
noticing the worlds new lethal tears,
in the sky new things would fly,
using computers to help us get by,
extinction could be a new revelation,
through out our dirty rotten nation,
give some time and help conservation,
green leaves that wont grow black will flow,
living and breathing the last we'll blow,
treasure what we have before its gone,
we don't want to look back destruction is upon,
in museums can only be seen,
the life that should have been,
only in past memories or old fables,
the world we no as historic tables,
stop your actions and learn to preserve,
the life and living we deserve,
any organism worthy of consistence,
mothers all in the whole existence,
if no respect we have to reject,
to the electric chair we have to inject,
fallen from our dying space,
whirled away like a beautiful face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 3:16 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Lawton Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 6:35 AM
I feel a prophetic verse in time to come. Nicely put Sharon. Thanks for sharing. Hugs xx
A  Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 3:07 AM
Sharon, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
Kyriacou Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 3:35 AM
I really enjoyed your poem it really has a variation in topics and opens your eyes to a lot of different ideas... xD
A   Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 10:27 PM
a lovely write, enjoyed reading,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Sharon. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry today .. hope u check out the contest scene offered to new members... good luck with luv..
Brown Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 11:51 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sharon. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Very creative and interesting you have penned so well on In between bricks and mortar, sharon
Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 3:59 AM
excellent peace here my friend thank you for sharing duncan
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