In Bed On Mondays

Forgetting all I knew...brought me back to you…

For you are my SOUL-SHINING fragrance-
a  t i c k l e  in the dark lights a spark.
You’re more than an acquaintance-
Edges of cliffs have brought me a lift
up to your eyes, oh please have patience.
I’ve ran outdoors  s e a r c h i n g  for more,
yet you draw an ace; you burn me to the core-
        ...yeah you burn me to the core-
                                       so let's close the door.
Tease me, please me- FORGET who I was,
s q u e e z e  me and let me love you because…
I need you to breath-
and my need brings  r e l i e f-
Oh, my need brings relief. 


***CHORUS***

Share with me tomorrow’s sorrow’s-
Push me, shove me, as long as you land ABOVE me-
Weekend dances and evening romances,
S e c o n d  glances from you I shall savor-
No party favors, just delicious flavors.
Candy-coated ice cream  s u n d a e s-
YOU and ME in BED on Mondays.
***


Believe in things that come from ABOVE…
Love me, hold me, I know you once told me
to let go of my inhibitions without condition-
Sketch my body then  m o l d  me.
Unfold ridiculous and conspicuous situations-
I’ve been sold to your MIRACULOUS infatuations-
Beliefs into realities of old fatalities, 
for I was dead; you brought  e a s e  to my mortality-
Trick me into  r e v e a l i n g  my appealing secret,
I kept concealing the truth; you told me to keep it
hidden from all who don’t care to know forbidden
l o v e…
    oh, I can't get enough.
           -no I can't get enough. 


***CHORUS***

Share with me tomorrow’s sorrow’s-
Push me, shove me, as long as you land ABOVE me-
Weekend dances and evening romances,
S e c o n d  glances from you I shall savor-
No party favors, just delicious flavors.
Candy-coated ice cream  s u n d a e s-
YOU and ME in BED on Mondays.
***


Oh baby...
    forgetting all I knew....brought me back to you.




Poem written on September 5, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/6/2017 7:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Laura! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/4/2017 7:41:00 AM
Really well done 35/40 congrats on your 3rd place win!
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Date: 10/2/2016 5:32:00 AM
Wow! What a lovely and tasty poetic delicacy, Laura! I love it:) Congratulations on this lovely win! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/1/2016 6:27:00 PM
really made me smile LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2016 9:35:00 AM
A 7 for this entertaining WINNING poem, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 10/1/2016 9:15:00 AM
Laura, Congrats on your win. Stop by my blog "in a perfect world" and celebrate with a smile or two. With Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 9/6/2016 9:15:00 PM
Just love the internal rhyme, reading out loud sound like a great rap song!
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Date: 9/7/2016 9:48:00 AM
thanks again! I wrote it at 3:00 a few nights ago lol sometimes my best stuff is in the middle of the night lol :)-luloo
Date: 9/6/2016 9:12:00 PM
This is simply spectacular writing Laura, you are on fire with this write! A7
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Date: 9/7/2016 9:47:00 AM
thank you John :)-luloo
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