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In Bed On Mondays

Forgetting all I knew...brought me back to you… For you are my SOUL-SHINING fragrance- a t i c k l e in the dark lights a spark. You’re more than an acquaintance- Edges of cliffs have brought me a lift up to your eyes, oh please have patience. I’ve ran outdoors s e a r c h i n g for more, yet you draw an ace; you burn me to the core- ...yeah you burn me to the core- so let's close the door. Tease me, please me- FORGET who I was, s q u e e z e me and let me love you because… I need you to breath- and my need brings r e l i e f- Oh, my need brings relief. ***CHORUS*** Share with me tomorrow’s sorrow’s- Push me, shove me, as long as you land ABOVE me- Weekend dances and evening romances, S e c o n d glances from you I shall savor- No party favors, just delicious flavors. Candy-coated ice cream s u n d a e s- YOU and ME in BED on Mondays. *** Believe in things that come from ABOVE… Love me, hold me, I know you once told me to let go of my inhibitions without condition- Sketch my body then m o l d me. Unfold ridiculous and conspicuous situations- I’ve been sold to your MIRACULOUS infatuations- Beliefs into realities of old fatalities, for I was dead; you brought e a s e to my mortality- Trick me into r e v e a l i n g my appealing secret, I kept concealing the truth; you told me to keep it hidden from all who don’t care to know forbidden l o v e… oh, I can't get enough. -no I can't get enough. ***CHORUS*** Share with me tomorrow’s sorrow’s- Push me, shove me, as long as you land ABOVE me- Weekend dances and evening romances, S e c o n d glances from you I shall savor- No party favors, just delicious flavors. Candy-coated ice cream s u n d a e s- YOU and ME in BED on Mondays. *** Oh baby... forgetting all I knew....brought me back to you. Poem written on September 5, 2016

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Date: 2/6/2017 7:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Laura! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/4/2017 7:41:00 AM
Really well done 35/40 congrats on your 3rd place win!
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Date: 10/2/2016 5:32:00 AM
Wow! What a lovely and tasty poetic delicacy, Laura! I love it:) Congratulations on this lovely win! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/1/2016 6:27:00 PM
really made me smile LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2016 9:35:00 AM
A 7 for this entertaining WINNING poem, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 10/1/2016 9:15:00 AM
Laura, Congrats on your win. Stop by my blog "in a perfect world" and celebrate with a smile or two. With Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 9/6/2016 9:15:00 PM
Just love the internal rhyme, reading out loud sound like a great rap song!
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Date: 9/7/2016 9:48:00 AM
thanks again! I wrote it at 3:00 a few nights ago lol sometimes my best stuff is in the middle of the night lol :)-luloo
Date: 9/6/2016 9:12:00 PM
This is simply spectacular writing Laura, you are on fire with this write! A7
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Date: 9/7/2016 9:47:00 AM
thank you John :)-luloo

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