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IN AND OF CREATION’S RESPONSIBILITY

(A Tanka 3 For The 6 and 7 days Given You & Me)

 

God simply whispered,

“...Be light…”! And here we all are:

All engaged in war:

A world created in love;

Peacefully from up above:-

 

Why can’t we not see,

A world given you and me,

to live in all free?

Satin’s only role for us,

Is awareness of disgust:-

 

War, Satin’s disgust:

The self-destruction of us;

Waring dawn to dust:-

This evil must now cease;

Praising God in loving peace!

 
God simply whispered, “...Be light…”! And here we all are: All engaged in war: A world created in love; Peacefully from up above:- Why can’t we not see, A world given you and me, to live in all free? Satin’s only role for us, Is awareness of disgust:- War, Satin’s disgust: The self-destruction of us; Waring dawn to dust:- This evil must now cease; Praising God in loving peace!

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