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IN AND OF CREATION’S RESPONSIBILITY

(A Tanka 3 For The 6 and 7 days Given You & Me)

 

God simply whispered,

“...be light…”! and here we all are:

all engaged in war:

A world created in love;

Peacefully from up above:-

 

Why can’t we not see,

A world given you and me,

to live in all free?

Satin’s only role for us,

Is awareness of disgust:-

 

War, Satin’s disgust:

The self-destruction of us;

Waring dawn to dust:-

This evil must now cease;

Praising God in loving peace!

 

IN AND OF CREATION'S RESPONSIBILITY

God simply whispered,
“...be light…”! and here we all are:
all engaged in war:
A world created in love;
Peacefully from up above:-

Why can’t we not see,
A world given you and me,
to live in all free?
Satin’s only role for us,
Is awareness of disgust:-

War, Satin’s disgust:
The self-destruction of us;
Waring dawn to dust:-
This evil must now cease;
Praising God in loving peace!
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