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In An Obscure Galaxy

The aristocratic Martian delicately kissed her hand She blushed, as only an alabaster Venetian can He ushered into his supersonic cab Endearing himself with a superlative gift of gab Away the two flew to an obscure galaxy They dined on poached protoplasm and astral puree But when it was time to pick up the tab The aristocrat -- no gentleman he -- said shockingly ~ 'You pay for it all: I'm a woman's libber, tee-hee' December 26, 2020 Fantasy with fictional beings Poetry Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger Word Count: 73 words

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/27/2020 8:55:00 AM

Poached protoplasm? Wow, how creative the Venetians are. And so are you, my friend. Hope you are having a super holiday season. I'm with my sister till after New Year's. It's great to be with family. Love your poem and I'm sending winning wishes your way! Hugs, Carolyn

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2020 4:54:00 PM

Thank you for your good wishes, Carolyn. Here's to a Healthy, Happy and Prosperous 2021! Season's best, Gershon

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/27/2020 6:06:00 AM

LoL Good one Gershon! I hope all is well and you have a Happy New Year :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2020 4:52:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. And I appreciate all the encouragement and support you've given me this year. Here's to Happiness and Good Health! :) gw

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/27/2020 3:48:00 AM

Lol, well they wanted equal rights so get your purse out misses. Happy New year Gershon Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2020 4:49:00 PM

There you go, Tom -- or maybe it's 'equal pay, but not equal paying!' lol. H.N.Y. to you too, Tom

Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2020 11:53:00 PM

Good story, Gershon, the person was sure a cheapskates', enjoyed reading. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs Eve

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2020 4:43:00 PM

Th.ank you so much, Eve. Please note that I've 'eliminated all tipping' on my website. lol. H.N.Y. to you too! :) gw