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1/19/25

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In the first moment of dawn, when the day is just emerging, there is a hush There is no one outside No animals stirring No cars going by You can see the pinks and yellow vivid colors in the sky as they reveal the daylight You can start to see the green of the trees and grass and the bold colors of flowers You can begin to hear the sounds of the day as it begins for people, birds, other creatures and suddenly the day is in full swing- In an instant

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Date: 2/3/2025 9:26:00 PM
aye.aye. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 2/4/2025 3:33:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/3/2025 10:43:00 AM
Clearly spoken, Kathleen. My thoughts exactly, yesterday morning. I like the simplicity of your words which fit the theme perfectly. Congrats on your win, I give it 10/10.
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 2/4/2025 3:33:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/22/2025 1:14:00 PM
Lovely poem Kathleen! Debx
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 1/22/2025 1:26:00 PM
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 1/19/2025 4:01:00 PM
What a nice poem. There is just that hush and beauty for just a moment then the day starts.
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 1/23/2025 3:58:00 AM
Thank you, Oliver!

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