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In Afghanistan

They were able to see the sun at last, to look all around, finally breathe without burqas begin a new chapter. Their words held more confidence. Is respect too large a word, perhaps not when whispered with laughter. Wearing smiles and proud faces, their daughters went to school like the boys, was their future assured? Was learning numbers and their alphabet fulfilling their dreams, or just making them more obscured? Women could greet each other on the street not be beaten with a pole, but never look in the eyes of a man. They could have paying jobs, wear sharp clothes, let lovely faces be exposed, never once looking back before freedom began. That all went away on a terrible day when planes left and men bled out of hills with rage to rule again with knife-sharpened hands and women once again destined to hide inside their dark cage. So, what was accomplished: a taste of freedom that rested on whims of people living far away? Is it perhaps worse to have known and then lose or never to have known-- who can say? As life uncertainly shifts backward again to religious rule and sin will minds and lives be what's left blowing in the wind in Afghanistan...

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Date: 8/22/2021 2:30:00 AM
Your expressive words bring much sadness to those of us who hanker for love and freedom, Ann! I see only pain, fear and tragedy for the Afghan people, especially children and women. World leaders need to rethink their policies, but not turn them into a game! ~ Regards // paul
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Ann Peck
Date: 8/22/2021 2:11:00 PM
Thank you, Paul, for your most thoughtful words. My heart breaks for the women and children, the elderly. Many friendships were formed between soldiers and citizens, many hearts hurting.
Date: 8/19/2021 1:10:00 AM
Free countries ought to be ashamed of themselves. To taste some modicum of liberty and then all changed as the Taliban took over is the biggest disgrace. But the free countries for the sake of wealth should paint their faces with shame. Hugs
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Ann Peck
Date: 8/19/2021 12:44:00 PM
I agree we should have shame for pulling out so swiftly and leaving no troops to keep Taliban in line. If we don't get every person who helped us out of there, it will be history's catastrophe and America's disgrace. Hugs to you!
Date: 8/18/2021 10:10:00 PM
They have had a taste of self assurance, one that will never leave them. Your poetry describes exactly the situation. Ann. Nostradamus predicted 600 years ago, of a great upevil early in the 21st century, i feel this possibly is the start, of uncertainty. I'm going to fav your poem, it is good and every well constructed.
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Ann Peck
Date: 8/19/2021 12:52:00 PM
Thank so much, Harry, for faving my poem. Well, I think Nostradamus was never wrong. If we're not now living thru the upheaval he predicted, I shudder to think what it might be. Take good care.
Date: 8/18/2021 10:09:00 AM
crying for them and for our soldiers! Count our blessings. suzanne
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Ann Peck
Date: 8/18/2021 5:20:00 PM
I don't know if I'm more angry or more sorrowful. The feelings are overwhelming.
Date: 8/17/2021 1:53:00 PM
It is very sad and horrific what we are witnessing happening over there. My heart breaks for these people who put their trust in those who betrayed them in the end.
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Date: 8/17/2021 2:41:00 PM
Exactly. Who would believe us now. It's just sad beyond words. CNN had an Afghan female judge on who is dressed like an American. She is quite sure she will be killed by the Taliban, so everything about the situation is awful. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 8/17/2021 12:00:00 PM
It is awful! The outrage should be strong!
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Date: 8/17/2021 2:33:00 PM
I absolutely agree, and I voted for Biden. This will define his presidency. I'm just sick for those people--clinging to planes. Awful. And now the females, young and old, will suffer again at the hands of the Taliban. It's too sad.

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