In a Vampish Way

In a vampish way, the moon erupts from the sea 
pirouetting across white cap and trough valley
through an impassioned performance of love set free
	in a vampish way.

A persistent tease, she sets her mind to dally
with Eros’ desirous heart as her victory, 
only to break it with her vigorous sally.

Darkened midnight skies find her in malicious glee 
as she counts coup for a final mental tally
and she continues en l’air on her odyssey
	in a vampish way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 9:48 AM
Vampish indeed, love the seductress tone used here about the moon, Linda, thoroughly enjoyed:) p.s. a fave for me too:)
Fowler Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 6:44 AM
Many thanks Jo. Your comments are a welcome addition to my day. Thank you for the fav!!!
Volumes Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 9:29 AM
You personified the moon, into a sexy temptress that dances and performs a vigorous odyssey! LAF I declare nobody has ever described her that way. Your unique poem is thoughtful and entertaining. Darn right vampish. This has to be a favorite
Fowler Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 6:42 AM
You are too kind to me my friend. Thanks for the lovely comment Svvie, and for the fav!! :)
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