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In a State of Sorrow - Tet

Joy Has turned To sorrow When you left me Love no longer lives in my heart, it died Grief, loneliness and sadness comforts me Why did you leave? I miss you Darling Bye 4-26-19 Contest: Tetractys This Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/7/2019 3:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2019 2:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Alexis.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/4/2019 9:47:00 AM

Alexis, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/4/2019 9:38:00 AM

Back with congratulations on.your top win. Tom

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/4/2019 9:04:00 AM

Congrats!!! dear Alexis...excellent entry my friend...Charlieku must be proud of all of us lol...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2019 8:32:00 AM

- Congratulations, Alexis :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/4/2019 8:03:00 AM

Congrats on your win Alexis with this sad write Alexis...

Charles Messina

Date: 5/4/2019 6:58:00 AM

So sad, but so well done Alexis. Congratulations on your win Hugs Charlie

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/4/2019 8:06:00 AM

Hi Charlie, You host good contest. I appreciate my win in your contests:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/29/2019 7:00:00 PM

I like the way you eased up on the intensity pedal in the second stanza and just let the goodbye float off. Nicely done, Alexis! Best wishes, Gershon