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In a Space

In a space of want in a time of need surrounded with a pressure like a gas leaked gragually slow unseen unheard waiting to ignite from a little spark explodes colors bright in a little metaphor i place between the words if you read deep enough a story will be heard. Dawn Mclaughlin. @Dawn2012.

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Date: 9/28/2012 9:30:00 AM
I like to use metaphors myself love your poem x davidscott
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Date: 9/14/2012 5:15:00 PM
A true poets words. Love it Dawn!! Hugs Michael
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