In a Space

In a space of want

in a time of need

surrounded with a pressure

like a gas leaked gragually

slow unseen unheard

waiting to ignite

from a little spark

explodes colors bright

in a little metaphor

i place between the words

if you read deep enough

a story will be heard.

 

Dawn Mclaughlin.    @Dawn2012.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 28, 2012 at 9:30 AM
I like to use metaphors myself love your poem x davidscott
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September 14, 2012 at 5:15 PM
A true poets words. Love it Dawn!! Hugs Michael
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