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In a Snow Globe

Leave your little round world, Leave the fake snow, Leave those people, who turn you upside down, Who think you are just a statue. A snow globe, Water inside, White round objects, Plastic little houses, And you are standing With your white dress, Waiting for someone who Glimpses through your transparent prison, Who gives you an earthquake as a gift, Puts you on the shelf And then leaves. Is that what you are waiting for? You don’t have the chance to swim! You don’t have the chance to touch the truth! Stop being a statue!! Stop making others believe That whatever they do Will never hurt you, Stop hiding your tears Inside a curtain of waters….. Glass should be broken, Water should be spilt, Tears should be streaming, Their drops should appear, Hot on you cheeks Salty on your lips Sugary in your heart…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/21/2012 8:03:00 PM
OmneyaStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 10/28/2012 8:34:00 AM
Interesting and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2012 7:24:00 AM
Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Omneya. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/16/2012 5:19:00 AM
great write Omneya,let it all leave your body,clear your mind,relax your soul,let your tears wash all the bad away
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Date: 10/14/2012 11:53:00 AM
Excellent piece my new poet friend. Welcome to the Soup. You have started with such beauty in your words. Hugs Michael
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/14/2012 2:43:00 PM
hey Micheal so glad to have a new friend here in the P.Soup! thanks for your comment and warm welcome! wish u all the best! Omneya
Date: 10/13/2012 2:53:00 PM
Hey, great writing..and thank you for looking at my stuff today. I hope you will check out more...I think we might relate
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/14/2012 2:43:00 AM
Hey Robert, Thanks for reading my stuff too! I would be glad to read more of your writing too because its true we might relate...:) Omneya
Date: 10/13/2012 2:29:00 PM
Yes, I could see that you were a talented poet, very well written my "new friend"!! - Love it, bravo !!! Wishing you a lovely weekend! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/14/2012 2:36:00 AM
Hello Anne! Your comment is as usual so warm and inspirational! Wishing you a great week and so glad you follow my work in here my "new friend" too ! :)) Lots of LOVE Omneya
Date: 10/13/2012 11:22:00 AM
Wow Omneya! This IS a lovely write! I love the way you've used the snow globe to illustrate the hidden emotions of one who'd rather hide. Nicely done!
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/14/2012 2:26:00 AM
Thanksss vicky for being the first to comment! so glad you like the poem! Omneya

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