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IN A RUSH She tarried in a rush, thus her tears hide. The palm of her left hand, the damp cold wall. She snuggled with the vine, as her nose sighed. The rose matched her roused cheeks, in scent’s recall ...so many pastel buds and waterfall. The quiescent pert petals wooed to nose. Long fingers grip the stem, the thrust of him. Her pearls in sunburnt hair...he’s here...time froze. His smile, his heart of gold, a whirlwind whim. As day begins, romantic light bedims. 7/26/2019 English Quintain Poetry Contest Sponsor: Janice Canerdy ababb iambic pentameter

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Date: 7/30/2019 1:00:00 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2019 1:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Funom! Hugs
Date: 7/28/2019 11:52:00 AM
Romantic Rush.All the best.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2019 1:08:00 PM
Thanks, Anisha! :)
Date: 7/27/2019 4:23:00 AM
Wow! Romantic and sensual also. I think this one is going to make her way to the top in any contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2019 1:09:00 PM
Thanks, sweet Caren! <3
Date: 7/26/2019 1:03:00 PM
A fine English Quintain dearest, Kim! Certainly a serious candidate for the contest ! Good luck my friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2019 8:54:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Date: 7/26/2019 12:56:00 PM
" bedims" to a new day...Well written... I like it...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2019 8:54:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo!
Date: 7/26/2019 9:04:00 AM
- You uncover gradually ... and gives a romantic experience ... beautiful, Kim :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2019 9:08:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I really enjoyed writing this!

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