In a Room

I penned-
a poem, 
where I slumped 

my mind 
in a book, 
watching 

the return 
of my gaze
as I listen 

to the gasping
of a night-
that never complains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations Ernesto on this wonderful poem being featured once again. Love, Shar
Brown Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 4:12 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry once again being featured this week Ernesto . Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 12:40 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Ernesto.Rgds Brian
Jordan Avatar
August 10, 2008 at 7:49 PM
Ernesto - long time my friend - Loved your poem and congrats on the feature - really a pleasure to read your work again
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
August 10, 2008 at 5:29 PM
"In A Room" is featured again. Congratulations, Ernesto. Vince
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