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In a Perfect World

cinquain cosmos of perfection warrants man's scrutiny finding our Father's fellowship Eden written 13 February 2016

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 6/15/2016 7:20:00 PM

Thank you, Carol, for the contest, Your Own Favorite Poem and your generosity of placements. I have many favorites; this is a more recent one. Oh to live in that perfect world one day.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/19/2016 1:12:00 AM

Awesome poetry n win Reason.. big congrats!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 10:22:00 PM

Reason, Congrats on your "Perfect World WIN." LINDA

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/18/2016 7:51:00 PM

Wow, I haven't read this one yet ... and to think, I thought my poem was the shortest one! This was really was a thought-provoking write ... I like how that very simple two-syllable word leaves an impact at the end. Congrats!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/19/2016 11:14:00 PM

thank you, Timothy, I welcome the honorable mention...it was a bit off-sides. But I enjoyed writing it and it has a message beyond the practical...more spiritually inclined.

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/18/2016 6:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Lin Lane

Date: 2/18/2016 6:03:00 PM

Well done and congratulations, Reason.

Lu Loo

Date: 2/18/2016 5:58:00 PM

Reason, congrats on your placement in the contest..-luloo *smiles*

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/19/2016 11:14:00 PM

Thanks Laura, for the read and the smiles. Glad for the placement.