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In a Perfect World

cinquain

cosmos
of perfection
warrants man's scrutiny
finding our Father's fellowship
Eden

written 13 February 2016

creationworldcinquain

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Reason A. Poteet

June 15, 2016 at 7:20 PM

Thank you, Carol, for the contest, Your Own Favorite Poem and your generosity of placements. I have many favorites; this is a more recent one. Oh to live in that perfect world one day.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 19, 2016 at 1:12 AM

Awesome poetry n win Reason.. big congrats!

Poet Destroyer A

February 18, 2016 at 10:22 PM

Reason, Congrats on your "Perfect World WIN." LINDA

Timothy Hicks

February 18, 2016 at 7:51 PM

Wow, I haven't read this one yet ... and to think, I thought my poem was the shortest one! This was really was a thought-provoking write ... I like how that very simple two-syllable word leaves an impact at the end. Congrats!

Reason A. Poteet

February 19, 2016 at 11:14 PM

thank you, Timothy, I welcome the honorable mention...it was a bit off-sides. But I enjoyed writing it and it has a message beyond the practical...more spiritually inclined.