In a Perfect World

In a perfect world The children would be singing Man would put down his weapon And dance joyfully Indians would hunt again And he would kiss me once more
2/9/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:23 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
Gorelick Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Thank you my dear...Glad to hear from you. Glad you liked it and gave it a 7..the judge gave it a 0......haha Barbara
Daniel Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:05 AM
A perfect piece:}
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