In a Minute of Time

One minute bought to make an impression,
   One minute to stir emotions, swirls of anger, guilt, affliction,
       One minute to pull the heartstrings to pack a punch to feel the sting -
              puppy dog’s hopeless eyes, 
                    matted fur, dismal cries,
                         broken spirits under rainy skies, 
                         neglected animals getting thinner,
                    shivering bones exposed in cold of winter
               In less than one minute, tears flow – 
          spokesperson speaks in somber tones,
     snapshots of distressed animals are shown 
as a somber song arouses sorrow.
One minute of time before ad fades to black, 
one minute to make a massive impact.
Is one minute enough time to make a human connection, 
                                           to cause a spiritual reflection, 
                                           to create a mood for heartfelt invocation?
In less than a minute a bird can take flight, clouds can drift by concealing light.
In less than a minute we can feel pain or regret, we can believe a lie, 
                                           turn our backs, become desensitized. 
I thought about one minute while I watched these scenes. 
I thought about cruelty and suffering.
I thought the strong overpowering the weak.
I thought about the imprint of the words we speak.
I thought about how in less than a minute innocence can die,
        and how it takes less than a minute to share a smile, soothe a child’s cry,
             or wipe the tears from grief-stricken eyes.   
Yes, a poet can breakdown in a moment of time
                 watching a commercial, a movie, or the sun setting in the sky.
In one minute, we can crumble or soar on high,
but what can we do with our time, what do we create, how can we shine?  
We can evoke passion in a moment, we can create change in a moment, 
we can live in the moment.  

In this moment, I need to wipe my own tears and give to the cause.
This organization has spent their minute well.   
  
 

Written 6/10/20 for Chantelle Anne Cooke's
Time Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/12/2020 11:42:00 AM
One moment of inspiration brings a poem to life, Congrats on your win Rhonda..
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph...I appreciate your return visit and congrats! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/12/2020 6:26:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Rhonda :) Much love
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Date: 6/14/2020 11:49:00 PM
Thanks, Aditi! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/12/2020 12:23:00 AM
This was a very creative take on the theme of time, Rhonda, and filled with compassion. I like how you modulated from the word minute to moment near the end, and the encouragement to live in the moment. Very nice write, love the pic too. Congratulations on your win! ~ John
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:49:00 PM
Thank you, John! I was inspired after watching a commercial on tv...as soon as I think I couldn't write another poem, inspiration comes from an unexpected place. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/11/2020 11:30:00 PM
This spoke to my heart. "In one minute, we can crumble or soar on high, but what can we do with our time, what do we create, how can we shine?" Wow!
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Date: 6/14/2020 11:46:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. I'm happy this one spoke to you! I was inspired to write this after watching a commercial, thinking about the time constraints and how advertisers use such a short time to sell us something or make an impact in some way, and they do it so well...blessings to you and thanks for your kindness always, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/11/2020 10:19:00 AM
A masterful write Rhonda So true what can be accomplished in a moment of time. You have a gift and you use it to build up and not tear down, your compassion is shining in this write.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:42:00 PM
Thank you, John! I am so grateful for your comments. I can't imagine a better compliment. Blessings to you and I can't thank you enough for your kindness :) Rhonda xx
Date: 6/10/2020 3:30:00 PM
A brilliant write Rhonda, really amazing shape to your piece with such great rhyme and imagery. It's amazing what a minute brings to your thoughts. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:33:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon! Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/10/2020 3:15:00 PM
Much depth to the discourse in your poem--powerful sentiments you express, Rhonda.
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Date: 6/14/2020 11:32:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, for the kind visit! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/10/2020 1:34:00 PM
Well thought and scribed, Rhonda! For me, the most important moment was watching my son's eyes open when he was born and seeing intelligence shining back at me! In contrast, watching the light fade from someone's eyes as they die remains unforgettable! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/14/2020 11:32:00 PM
Thank you, Rico! Yes, agreed. I've experienced the beginning and end of life with loved ones, too. Nothing is more unforgettable. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/10/2020 12:53:00 PM
This is such a heartwarming muse from your pen Rhonda! Each word leaves an impression on my heart. Best wishes for the contest. This deserves to be a winner :)
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Date: 6/14/2020 11:29:00 PM
Very sweet of you, Aditi! Thank you...blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/10/2020 12:49:00 PM
"I thought about about the imprint of the words we speak" -- Powerful verse, Rhonda. As Solomon wrote: "Life and death are in the power of the tongue." (Substitute pen). Profound penning! Thanks, Gershon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:28:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! I wrote this after watching an ASPCA commercial. I'm often surprised by where inspiration comes from. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/10/2020 11:20:00 AM
A moment in time is all it takes, A moving write Rhonda..
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Date: 6/14/2020 11:25:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph! Rhonda xx
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