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In a lucid dream

In a lucid dream, which seemed so real, atop a hill I saw monks, in deep trance and although their eyes were closed, I could feel, dance of living light, in their bodies prance. Wonderment being my heart’s undertone, silent bliss thunder pervaded my form, etched deep within my core, so mine to own, thus in timeless time, I became the storm. I woke up from sleep, looking for a sign and sure enough I felt my spine aflame, in as a humming pulse of love divine, which has since remained, as my claim to fame. Now ambling along, I sing a love song ~ Blissful, joyous heart, taking all along

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Date: 11/18/2023 2:56:00 PM
sometimes I feel as if my dreams are more real, more lucid, than my 'reality.' I find the wonderment you mention inside my own lucidity (if that makes sense). I'm reminded of the words, "row, row, row your boat gently down the stream, merrily, merrily, merrily, merrily, live is but a dream. More to those words than meets the eye. I digress. I am faving this to read again later, have a blessed evening, Sara
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Date: 11/18/2023 5:37:00 PM
If the world is but thought and we are living light crystallised in organic form, then what actually is real? In dreams, astral realms are real. Here, the manifest universe is real. When all thoughts cease, manifestations disappear and only light of self-aware identityless Self remains.
Date: 11/18/2023 8:39:00 AM
Ah iv had few of those lucid dreams, what a brilliant write seeker, i love the way you’ve written also “ so in timeless time, I became the storm.” powerful! Pleasure always reading your rhymes, sending you light always
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Date: 11/18/2023 9:17:00 AM
Thank you, dear IE
Date: 11/18/2023 7:17:00 AM
We are only a dream away from awakening. Well said my friend. Blessings.
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Date: 11/18/2023 9:17:00 AM
Yesss ~ a dream away :)

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