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Zesty I Could Be Again

Apple blossoms flutter in the breeze.  Awakening,
Barefoot to the brook we go, brightly scampering,
Counting caterpillars discovered on our way -
Daffodil and daisy picking this delightful day.

Enjoying the earth’s rebirth, revitalized are we!
Free, like foals we frolic through the fields with energy.
Green surrounds us; onto grass gratefully we fall.
Happy to have found this heaven, on a hill we sprawl.

Invigorated by our rest, in a little while,
Joyously we jump right up; we only have a mile. . .
Knowing  we are getting close, faster now we run,
Leaping over lilies lying lush beneath the sun.

Myriads of other meadow flowers now appear.
Nature’s hidden splendor is getting very near.
Over by an old oak tree, it’s coming into view!
Picture perfect, it presents a pure and pleasant hue.

Quickly we approach it, without a single qualm.
Refreshingly it beckons us; our romp disturbs its calm.
Suddenly we’re splashing , and later we will seek
Tadpoles that are teeming in this, our secret creek.

Until the sun has disappeared in the April sky,
Vibrant crimson will have spilled through clouds. We say goodbye
With great reluctance to our brook, which has been for us
Xanadu!  But now the warmth of home awaits us. Thus. . . 

Youthful frolicking is finished. We have left the stream.
Zesty I could be again but only in a dream!

Submitted Dec. 4, 2021 on Word: Zesty
For the '''Z'' Contest, New or Old -' Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 12/11/2021 2:23:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your First Place win in my "Z" Contest. Your poem is full of wonderful imagery, nice images too ~ love and serenity _ Constance
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Date: 12/9/2021 11:01:00 PM
Great pictures. Beautiful writing. Beautiful imagery. Very interesting and enchanting to read. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/9/2021 11:26:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. Love your write and two pictures. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day......
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Date: 12/8/2021 4:46:00 PM
Tons of imagery and color and eye of an artist. Andrea, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Hugs and lots of Love Eve
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Date: 12/7/2021 1:11:00 PM
What a fun day Andrea filled with every delightful activity by the brook on a bright April day. Congratulations on your win. Can't wait to go wading in the brook again come April. Blessings!
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Date: 12/7/2021 8:43:00 AM
So beautiful. Describes youth's spirit and exuberance so well. I love this poignant line: Youthful frolicking is finished. We have left the stream. Sad but true...we have.
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Date: 3/7/2020 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your First Placement with this beauty Andrea! xxoo
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Date: 3/5/2020 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Two "Great" pictures with a "Great" poem. Enjoy your win and day......
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Date: 3/4/2020 7:12:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this picturesque piece along your delightful activities poetically. God bless you.
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Date: 3/3/2020 11:07:00 PM
Congrats again for a new win, Andrea.. Wonderful theme and alliteration..
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Date: 3/3/2020 5:42:00 PM
What a joyful piece! Congrats on your well deserved top win, Andrea.
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Date: 3/3/2020 9:37:00 AM
Beautiful imagery with seamless rhyme and alliteration. Love this!
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Date: 3/3/2020 1:01:00 AM
Wow, an Abecedarian poem and also a rhyme.. an awesome write with great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/19/2020 1:49:00 PM
Your flow from one line to another is impressive Andrea, in this wonderful spring Abecedarian. xxoo
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Date: 1/18/2016 7:11:00 AM
Andrea, this is superb, I so enjoyed reading this piece.
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:04:00 PM
A very descriptive write and could just see this romp along the creek. Awesome. love phyl
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Date: 3/9/2015 6:42:00 PM
Very cool poem. Frankly, I've never heard of this poem category until now but I think it's really cool and you definitely did a great job with it! I love the imagery in the line "Vibrant crimson will have spilled through clouds. We say goodbye"
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Date: 3/2/2015 1:03:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful Andrea! perfect pics here,, congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/28/2015 8:16:00 AM
Myriads of meadow flowers appear along with other wonderful images you bring to life with your spring words. Such beauty unfolds with every line. Grats on your contest win.
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:32:00 AM
I loved the spring delights in your Abecedarian Andrea. Kudos on your win! I also loved the pictures which enhanced your poem.
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:18:00 PM
nice one Andrea. SKAT
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:02:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful poem. 7 and blessings
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Date: 2/27/2015 7:23:00 PM
I think these are really tough and you wrote a beauty...congrats Andrea!
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Date: 2/27/2015 2:05:00 PM
The ABC’s have danced the spring dance and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats …Sara
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Date: 2/27/2015 1:55:00 PM
Well you let us frolic with you again through your pen and paper. Congratulations on another fine win.
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