Notes About The Poem

in a funk

wilting in the setting sun
dissolving deflating
undernourished underfed
neglected rejected

unknown
a mystery
if any degree of pampering
can bring me back to life



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Allison Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 10:39 AM
aww line this is so full of longing for a lost relationship, thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 6:56 AM
Thanks, Jan ~ hope you are doing well
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