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In a Forest

Was walking along Through clearing in a forest The beauty astounds Lights are emanating out In multi-colored fashion Russell Sivey Entrant into Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest 5/13/2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/19/2012 9:52:00 PM

Congrats on your win Russell! A beautiful.walk you described. Blessings and love, Rhonda

John Freeman

Date: 5/19/2012 8:48:00 PM

Russell, I love the short form of poetry, it says so much with so little, and this is no different, congrats on a well deserved win. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/19/2012 6:11:00 PM

Congratulations on a beautiful thought and win. Joyce

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/19/2012 3:52:00 PM

congrts Russell, different and wonderful. harry

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/19/2012 3:52:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/19/2012 3:41:00 PM

Great wining work..Enjoyed reading this descriptive poetic presentation..Congrats on your win..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/19/2012 2:05:00 PM

When u take this walk again I will be glad to go with you!! Great light show in the middle of that forest, Russell! Yes, it is a real beauty! :) Gwendolen

David Williams

Date: 5/19/2012 12:28:00 PM

Russell congrats on your win..David

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2012 10:29:00 AM

Dear Russell, while reading your poem, I felt like I was walking right beside you, seeing these astonishing lights. Alexa and I congratulate you on your win! Love, Carolyn

Tim B

Date: 5/15/2012 7:33:00 PM

A beautiful poem and an excellent entry for the contest. Best of luck Russell. You paint a beautiful picture with these words.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2012 10:14:00 PM

Nicely done, Russell. I hope you do well in the contest, and thanks for your sweet comment on my last poem

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/13/2012 4:52:00 PM

You words indeed paint the picture Russell....:) Best Wishes in the contest !! big hugs, love ya , deb