Russell Sivey Poet Tanka

In a Forest

Was walking along
Through clearing in a forest
The beauty astounds
Lights are emanating out
In multi-colored fashion

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest

5/13/2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 21, 2012 at 7:32 AM Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders May 19, 2012 at 9:52 PM Congrats on your win Russell! A beautiful.walk you described. Blessings and love, Rhonda

John Freeman May 19, 2012 at 8:48 PM Russell, I love the short form of poetry, it says so much with so little, and this is no different, congrats on a well deserved win. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson May 19, 2012 at 6:11 PM Congratulations on a beautiful thought and win. Joyce

Harry Horsman May 19, 2012 at 3:52 PM congrts Russell, different and wonderful. harry

Debbie Guzzi May 19, 2012 at 3:52 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick May 19, 2012 at 3:41 PM Great wining work..Enjoyed reading this descriptive poetic presentation..Congrats on your win..Sara

Gwendolen Song May 19, 2012 at 2:05 PM When u take this walk again I will be glad to go with you!! Great light show in the middle of that forest, Russell! Yes, it is a real beauty! :) Gwendolen

David Williams May 19, 2012 at 12:28 PM Russell congrats on your win..David

Carolyn Devonshire May 19, 2012 at 10:29 AM Dear Russell, while reading your poem, I felt like I was walking right beside you, seeing these astonishing lights. Alexa and I congratulate you on your win! Love, Carolyn

Tim B May 15, 2012 at 7:33 PM A beautiful poem and an excellent entry for the contest. Best of luck Russell. You paint a beautiful picture with these words.

Andrea Dietrich May 13, 2012 at 10:14 PM Nicely done, Russell. I hope you do well in the contest, and thanks for your sweet comment on my last poem

Deborah Burch May 13, 2012 at 4:52 PM You words indeed paint the picture Russell....:) Best Wishes in the contest !! big hugs, love ya , deb