In a Field of Snow

Duchess, a brown chestnut Tennessee Walker with a
long flowing ebony mane, frolicked non-stop along the 
fenced pasture bordering the corn field.  She had the 
whole eighty acres to herself, kicking up her heels as if 
she was still a yearling.  Fall was nearing its peak and 
winter was just around the corner; for Duchess, it was 
just another wonderful season like spring or summer.  
The dark gray skies indicated a storm was approaching 
and with the nights changing temperatures, a dusting 
was evident.  Dusk slithered in with the north wind, 
suddenly- whirling fallen leaves and whipping cold- 
needle- like rain pierced her huge brown eyes.  Duchess 
bolts – and like the wind, wheels her slender muscular 
body in a joyous dance.  Hoofs thunder intensely on 
hardened cold soil, uprooting clumps of grass, sending 
them flying along with her splaying tail.  Oxygen 
saturated nostrils swell as she canters poetically in a field 
of crystals.  The snow now picks up pace as does her 
slow stride; turning into a gallop.  Steam pours from 
swollen lungs through her soft muzzle, she feels alive 
but exhausted from the sudden burst.  She gazes across 
the open field and watches the tiny crystals collect on 
evergreen along the hillside, gradually transforming into 
puffy white flakes.  She knows winter is here.

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Second Place Winner ~ "Horses or Snowflakes or Horses 
and Snowflakes” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance~A Rambling Poet~
Nov. 8, 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Selfa Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Worth the read! Great! :)
Muzzey Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 1:29 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed Hansteven. Would have responded sooner but have terrible internet connection.
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December 29, 2015 at 5:29 PM
CARYL, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page during the last week of 2015 and beginning of 2016 :) awesome way to start the year... Enjoy the coming Year.... SKAT
Muzzey Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 1:27 PM
Thank you Skat, hope you had a wonderful New Year too. Would have responded sooner but have terrible internet connection.
Zerbst Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Very well done descriptions here. Immensely enjoyed reading your poetic, flowing story. Happy new year!
Muzzey Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Happy New Year to you too Isaiah, I'm glad you enjoyed my write. Sorry I have replied sooner but I have terrible internet connection, so am unable to get on a lot. Caryl
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 9:43 AM
wow, what a wonderful picture of a horse and the coming first snow of winter. Congrats on a fine win. LUv, Andrea
Bagnall Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 6:02 AM
Congrats, I still enjoyed it this time :)
Roberts Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 12:38 PM
very visual piece, love it, congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Caryl, I could picture the scene from start to finish. Congratulation's on your win in Constance's contest >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 3:20 PM
Congrats Caryl on your win in Constance's contest with this super entry luv.. enjoy a grand win tonight with luv... excellent write...
Devonshire Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 2:55 PM
I love the amazing story behind your poem, Caryl. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:51 PM
What a lovely story from the perspective of Duchess. Congratulaitons. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Caryl
Richards Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Lovely story=telling, Caryl.....one can picture it like watching a movie! Congratulations on your win!! ~ Carrie
Bagnall Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:17 AM
It was a pleasure to read this narrative today, I really enjoyed it, good luck in the contest
Ruebel Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 1:38 PM
Dear Caryl, As a Ranch Manager I am exposed to all our beautiful Dressage horses each and every day. I love this poem, it is home to me....Beautiful! As Always, Shar
Mehta Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 4:50 AM
Very nice pen picture of Dutchess, a tennessee walker you have created well worded, Caryl
Mannan Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 11:05 PM
what a beautiful narrative. All the very best for the contest. Thanks for the comments.
Bourner Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 7:20 PM
a very well written poem, love the imagery. good luck in the contest! ------Ell
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