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In a Field Laced With Nevers

~ Sitting alone in a field laced with nevers that sunlight avoids as stars fade from view picking a clover of unlucky petals found on the edge of a soft summer hue Seeing a path leading up to tomorrow winding its way past the frown on my face different scenes for a mind that is empty in outlines of sadness that boundaries trace Echoes employ every decibel playing counting the measures as harmony spills bouncing about lonely tree tops now crying running from voices that call from the hills While here I sit in this field laced with nevers constricting sounds sent to muffle the clear stuck in a world where the silence is screaming muting the verses I’m longing to hear ~

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Date: 1/21/2020 7:17:00 PM
What a title; what a masterpiece! Bravo, Poet! Cheers, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 1/22/2020 8:24:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 1/17/2020 4:09:00 PM
Heart felt, deeply emotional Chris. Great last stanza!! Ron :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/17/2020 4:34:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend for all of your kindness.
Date: 1/17/2020 12:45:00 PM
I know exactly how this feels. This poem reaches deep within. Well written Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/17/2020 1:12:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 1/17/2020 7:01:00 AM
Love that title! And the poem. Never is the saddest word in the world.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/17/2020 7:30:00 AM
Thanks so very much Agnes. I am thrilled you like this one
Date: 1/16/2020 8:55:00 PM
A beauty of a poem wrapped in sadness! Great line: Sitting alone in a field laced with nevers
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Chris Green
Date: 1/17/2020 7:29:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this and appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such a nice comment.
Date: 1/16/2020 6:17:00 PM
such a sad lonely poem that brings tears... one can feel the longing and ache in this one Chris... you do sad as well as you do love poems....wow...i am in awe of your talent... goodnight! hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 1/17/2020 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Sandy but no tears...please. I appreciate your kind words and this smile I always wear when you stop by

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