In a Field Laced With Nevers

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Sitting alone 
in a field laced with nevers
that sunlight avoids
as stars fade from view

picking a clover
of unlucky petals
found on the edge 
of a soft summer hue

Seeing a path
leading up to tomorrow
winding its way
past the frown on my face

different scenes
for a mind that is empty
in outlines of sadness
that boundaries trace

Echoes employ
every decibel playing
counting the measures
as harmony spills

bouncing about
lonely tree tops now crying
running from voices
that call from the hills

While here I sit
in this field laced with nevers
constricting sounds
sent to muffle the clear

stuck in a world
where the silence is screaming
muting the verses
I’m longing to hear

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 7:17 PM
What a title; what a masterpiece! Bravo, Poet! Cheers, Gershon
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January 22, 2020 at 8:24 AM
Thanks my friend.
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January 17, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Heart felt, deeply emotional Chris. Great last stanza!! Ron :)
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January 17, 2020 at 4:34 PM
Thanks so much my friend for all of your kindness.
Sands Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:45 PM
I know exactly how this feels. This poem reaches deep within. Well written Chris :)
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January 17, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this one.
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January 17, 2020 at 7:01 AM
Love that title! And the poem. Never is the saddest word in the world.
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January 17, 2020 at 7:30 AM
Thanks so very much Agnes. I am thrilled you like this one
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January 16, 2020 at 8:55 PM
A beauty of a poem wrapped in sadness! Great line: Sitting alone in a field laced with nevers
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January 17, 2020 at 7:29 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this and appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such a nice comment.
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January 16, 2020 at 6:17 PM
such a sad lonely poem that brings tears... one can feel the longing and ache in this one Chris... you do sad as well as you do love poems....wow...i am in awe of your talent... goodnight! hugs
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January 17, 2020 at 7:29 AM
Thank you Sandy but no tears...please. I appreciate your kind words and this smile I always wear when you stop by
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