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In a Different State of Affairs

In A Different State Of Affairs Days he breathed his words of worth, beyond his measured existence, he is not negatives of a photograph but proofs of his true presence. He filters through sunlit trees, bent every way for an unspecified, While others are statuesque and true, still he is prescribed. He sees a desk, there'd be a missing book, he combed a tattered mind, surprised, he'd find a mind of clear awake eyes, surprisingly, Yon shelf there'd be his book, but wore a troubled look, yet, for how'd it came to be, afraid still, ventured his curiosity, for what he feared returned, it'd be a tattered mind, same eyes see. With his opened eyes, he looks around, within a room beyond a desk and shelf, he unwittingly, with those affected eyes cast opposing sights that bear of no direction, to oddly gaze a floor... ...as a book, sit unfound once more. 2019 September 08 *1st Place* Sometimes love is not enough ~~Silent One
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Agustin Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 9:22 PM
Wow! Congrats..... Poignant piece exposing your poetic prowess. Thanks for sharing your talents, and your gifts. God bless you.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 10:24 PM
Bless be the journey, me writes... ~ Aloha always William (Read Soup mail)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful first placement William! Your work is always so unique and thought-provoking. Beautiful! xxoo
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Mahalo nui Connie--much too kind as your usual self ~ Aloha always William
La France Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 2:49 PM
William congratulations on your win..nice music
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Hehe!--those guys were really good!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 10:41 PM
Congrats on your win :) Blessings
Pandit Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Congrats William on your first place win.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 3:45 PM
There is my trusted friend ~ Aloha always William
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 1:52 PM
- Congratulations on your top win, William - // Anne-Lise :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 3:44 PM
My thanks for being at the TOP of my list ~ Aloha always William
One Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 11:19 AM
I like what you did here and how you approached the contest in a different style with a great analogy.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 3:43 PM
My thanks again, my true silent one ~ Aloha always William
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