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In A Different State Of Affairs Days he breathed his words of worth, beyond his measured existence, he is not negatives of a photograph but proofs of his true presence. He filters through sunlit trees, bent every way for an unspecified, While others are statuesque and true, still he is prescribed. He sees a desk, there'd be a missing book, he combed a tattered mind, surprised, he'd find a mind of clear awake eyes, surprisingly, Yon shelf there'd be his book, but wore a troubled look, yet, for how'd it came to be, afraid still, ventured his curiosity, for what he feared returned, it'd be a tattered mind, same eyes see. With his opened eyes, he looks around, within a room beyond a desk and shelf, he unwittingly, with those affected eyes cast opposing sights that bear of no direction, to oddly gaze a floor... ...as a book, sit unfound once more. 2019 September 08 *1st Place* Sometimes love is not enough ~~Silent One

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Date: 9/18/2019 9:22:00 PM
Wow! Congrats..... Poignant piece exposing your poetic prowess. Thanks for sharing your talents, and your gifts. God bless you.
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Date: 9/18/2019 10:24:00 PM
Bless be the journey, me writes... ~ Aloha always William (Read Soup mail)
Date: 9/18/2019 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful first placement William! Your work is always so unique and thought-provoking. Beautiful! xxoo
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Date: 9/18/2019 1:35:00 PM
Mahalo nui Connie--much too kind as your usual self ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/17/2019 2:49:00 PM
William congratulations on your win..nice music
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Date: 9/17/2019 3:32:00 PM
Hehe!--those guys were really good!
Date: 9/14/2019 10:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win :) Blessings
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Date: 9/14/2019 3:16:00 PM
Congrats William on your first place win.
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Date: 9/14/2019 3:45:00 PM
There is my trusted friend ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/14/2019 1:52:00 PM
- Congratulations on your top win, William - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2019 3:44:00 PM
My thanks for being at the TOP of my list ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/14/2019 11:19:00 AM
I like what you did here and how you approached the contest in a different style with a great analogy.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 9/14/2019 3:43:00 PM
My thanks again, my true silent one ~ Aloha always William

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