In 3 Words

In my bed
A deep sleep
Taking a rose
I rise up
Through the ceiling
Past the roof
Over my yard
Down the street
To the place
Where Love dwells
To her window
By her side
I kiss her
She rises up
We dance together
In pale moonlight
She moans sweetly
A nice dream
Then she awakes 
Only to find
Just one rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Goudreau Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 8:33 PM
Nicely executed
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 2:39 PM
- Welcome as a new member at P-Soup - A great first poem from you :) - I wish you good luck and a lot of new "poet" friends, Leo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rabura Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 9:13 AM
short,nice,sensual..etc. I really love your work
A  Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 11:10 PM
A lovely write Leo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
A   Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 11:07 PM
Hi Leo, WOW, so sweet-- WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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