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In 3 Words

In my bed A deep sleep Taking a rose I rise up Through the ceiling Past the roof Over my yard Down the street To the place Where Love dwells To her window By her side I kiss her She rises up We dance together In pale moonlight She moans sweetly A nice dream Then she awakes Only to find Just one rose

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/17/2015 8:33:00 PM

Nicely executed

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2015 2:39:00 PM

- Welcome as a new member at P-Soup - A great first poem from you :) - I wish you good luck and a lot of new "poet" friends, Leo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Boygene Rabura

Date: 10/11/2015 9:13:00 AM

short,nice,sensual..etc. I really love your work

Skat A

Date: 10/10/2015 11:10:00 PM

A lovely write Leo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/10/2015 11:07:00 PM

Hi Leo, WOW, so sweet-- WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@