Impulsive

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07/06/23

Writing Challenge I words

Contest by La Constance France

IMPULSIVE Most the impulsive tales of love ! Just ignoring reality two hesitant hearts are conserved. Devotion claimed priority . Lovers rolled rippled in romance. Most the impulsive tales of love ! Vibrant couple to dance and prance. yielding yearnings to observe. So ! Joint journey they deserved. Emerald emotive urge surged. Most the impulsive tales of love ! Pearly passion and lust converged. Yet fate can't permit unison. Amour to mourne by cooing doves. Separation draws conclusion. Most the impulsive tales of love !

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Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2023 1:23:00 PM

Anisha, thank you for taking part in my Writing Challenge I Words !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/6/2023 10:30:00 AM

- "Most the impulsive tales of love ... with pearly passion and lust" ... sounds beautiful, Anisha :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs