Impulses

For sure Laura ..for sure.. your words are pure romance... thankxxx for all your special comments on my poetry reads today.. glad u enjoy my writings..luv.. Linda-Marie

awesome write! niece loves it! :)!!!!!

~ Smile, alright, the answer to question A: "Jim Morrison, 'The Lizard King!!!'" ~ Smile, but I bet "Your Beauty" already knew that right!!? ~ And, I love "Your" write here; a lot that can be interpreted, within seven little words...."A Wonderful Write Dear Laura, Wrapped In, 'Impulses'"....Again, As Always, "My Love & Warmth, Always & Forever, To 'You & Your Loves,' Until, 'We Break On Through To The Other Side,' John!!!" ~ "Have A Very Beautiful Day, Beautiful Laura!!!":):) "Bye" ~

~ "Tone - Unites - Strong desire - Pupil gazing - Stir." ~ "Girl you know I'd be a liar, if I were to say to you now, girl we couldn't get much higher, come on baby light my fire, try to set the night on fire...." ~ Smile, now who does that remind "You" of, "Lovely Laura Mckenzie!!?" ~ Smile, now, "You" only get one guess!? ~ This write here sounds like, two souls, slowly melding, together...."How Beautiful A Thought!!!":):) ~ Cont. ~

this is nice. check otu some of my poems

Great write and thank you for commenting on my work also.

I enjoyed reading this.

This certainly does not sound like it needs any gasoline. Wow! It already blazing it seems. Great job! ~Joseph

Lovely Lanterne Laura>>James

Laura, I enjoyed reading your amazing Lanterne.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Love, Carol

A wonderful entry to Brian's contest, Laura!! Nicely written!!

Thanks for supporting my contes Laura.Rgds Brian I belive MP was the inspiration for this design.

am not really familiar with this form of poetry but i got to say this, this one stirred something in me that had lain dormant for sometime :-p Good one Laura! John E

Very nice lanterne, Laura. Welcome back! We missed you! Love, Carolyn

Interesting use of this concise form. Much said in these few words. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing. Karen

I love this piece....all five lines marry so well together...best wishes.

this is a really intense! cool thinker of a great lanterne! Laura! good luck in the contest! and keep writin' all the great poems that you do for us!!! love, jim