Robert Pettit Poet Rhyme

Improve Your Aim

I think Cupid must be missing his target.
Desirable women appear to be harder to get.
Little guy, after you draw back your bow,
the arrow must travel straight when you let it go.
There, you have missed another one for me.
Why has this been posing you some difficulty?
Do you require additional lessons in archery?
Take all of your arrows and shoot them through the air.
Let that cute one over there know that I care.
Hit a bull’s eye over there for me.
If not, I will have to go to E-Harmony.

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Francine Roberts February 12, 2011 at 4:24 PM hahaha, e-harmony huh? well they won't do any worse than cupid's bad aim

Karen Dominick February 12, 2011 at 4:24 PM Hi Robert! Its all about the way of being and not the doing! However, I hear that 3 out of 10 people are now meeting their spouses online! Enjoyed your poem! Thanks for the kind comments on mine - Best, Karen

Julie Heckman February 12, 2011 at 3:35 PM very amuzing bit of rhyme. Love the last part about E-Harmony. Great for Valentines day.

Anthony Nutter February 12, 2011 at 3:31 PM Always love the ending to your poems they always catch me by surprise.

Jancarl Campi February 12, 2011 at 3:20 PM A very interesting poem here. Perhaps E-Harmony may be a solution. Or maybe a divine providence may step in. Hope a sweet gal comes your way before 2/14. Take care and keep you rmuse happy, Jancarl