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Impromptu

i've given my give i've begun my begin not even shouting at my image mirrored before me for surely it's not me or wasn't what was me before for now after shaving finding beneath years of beard growth the face of a baby a baby's wrinkly bottom

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/21/2019 9:27:00 PM

Giggles <3

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/22/2019 10:52:00 PM

Jajaja so much laughter at your comments. Bit I must say I was struck down when you mentioned to match your armpits. GOOD for you woman. I've been trying to convince mi Musa, but she is still young and full of heart. (NOT TO SAY you aren't Maureen. Always thanks for the comments. I think you are the only one here that gets me...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/22/2019 8:31:00 AM

...my squeeze pointed out how great the wig brings out my gold chin whiskers ;p

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/22/2019 8:05:00 AM

I did. And sticking to it. Bought a wig for when I feel like hair. Hippy hair to match my armpits. I want one more, a Madonna blonde for when I want to have more fun, blondes do you know, and to go with my pearls, buzzed, just won't do.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/21/2019 10:33:00 PM

I really didn't shave. Which at first concerned my Muse, but even she had to laugh; so I'm glad it worked Maureen. Always thanks.