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Imprisoned

Before my door I stand waiting my Babe, my life, my love. Grating, the key slips through the lock. I turn the knob and shove. Each tear filled moment we’re apart, my heart for you yet yearns, but lonely it stands unopened. The bolt no longer turns. This prison that you hide inside was once a home we share but now you’ve changed the lock on me and left me in despair. What once we had is now all gone, just memories they are. As I stand before my doorway, I feel the burning scar. I hear the lock opening and you stand there with a smile, inviting me into your house. Reprieve from my exile? 09/16/2017

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Date: 11/10/2017 5:38:00 AM
Bravo - I love your mastery of the pen.
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James Inman
Date: 11/10/2017 6:07:00 AM
Thank you once again Line. I love the fact that you seem to enjoy it, lol.
Date: 10/7/2017 8:17:00 PM
so glad to see this one placed as well. Congratulations!! Can you think of a poem of yours I have not seen? I can't find one right now!!
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James Inman
Date: 10/8/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 9/28/2017 1:49:00 PM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..Sara
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James Inman
Date: 9/28/2017 3:04:00 PM
Thank you for hosting Sara. I appreciate you taking the time. I loved the inspiration and your lovely comment.
Date: 9/28/2017 1:00:00 PM
Well-written, moving write, James. Love the end. Congrats on your placement! Janice
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James Inman
Date: 9/28/2017 3:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Janice.
Date: 9/27/2017 5:10:00 PM
James, oh such an emotional write, congratulations !
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James Inman
Date: 9/28/2017 3:02:00 PM
Thank you BW. What happened with the collab.?
Date: 9/19/2017 9:52:00 PM
James this tears the heart inside rendering a sadness for the person experiencing this lost love and then alleviating the pain somewhat in the end. Wonderfully written and expressed with surreal emotion.
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James Inman
Date: 9/20/2017 12:41:00 AM
Michael, I appreciate all of your visits wonderful comments tonight. Thank you.
Date: 9/19/2017 7:37:00 PM
oh is this for the STUCK contest? If it were a sonnet or that other type of poetry she asked for, the theme would be perfect for that one. I enjoyed reading this one. It's my favorite of the three I saw today from you. Wish I could see more. But I am way behind here and will have to stay behind probably until my weekend arrives!!
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James Inman
Date: 9/19/2017 8:19:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your precious time with me Andrea. Yes, this is for that contest. I can't remember the name of the form. It's challenging.
Date: 9/18/2017 9:32:00 PM
Well-done, James--glad to see that ending! Janice
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James Inman
Date: 9/19/2017 6:43:00 AM
Thank you Janice.

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