Imprison Me


Beware the dark of azure twilight
where lightning's arc will lure the sprite,
their wings, so stark, like velour midnight,
fair creature's that mark the allure of starlight.

Share thy tongue sweet lark in pure delight.
There, where spark of amour and passions ignite,
fair, the heart will embark on seas of obscure rite;
ensnare me, oh Plutarch, immure my soul with your insight.


06/28/2020


Triple Rhyme Poetry Contest
Hosted by: Beth Evans

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/3/2020 11:02:00 PM
Well woven, James, beautifully put together with a classic feel, congrats!
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James Inman
Date: 10/4/2020 7:55:00 AM
Nice of you to visit Viv, hope things are well with you. Thanks for the nice comment.
Date: 7/18/2020 8:50:00 AM
Remarkable quadruple rhymes! One would think that ‘triple’ would be enough of a challenge. Congratulations! James.
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James Inman
Date: 7/18/2020 9:51:00 AM
Thank you Geoffrey.
Date: 7/16/2020 8:59:00 AM
Wow! This is not only full of metaphors but a gem with the artistic imagery James. Congratulations on your win. Blessings! :)
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James Inman
Date: 7/16/2020 11:16:00 AM
Thank you for visiting Aditi and for the nice comment.
Date: 7/14/2020 7:56:00 AM
Vividly descriptive, lovely, WINNING poem, James! Janice
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:18:00 AM
Hi Janice, I made it a quadruple rhyme just for the fun of it. Thanks for the nice comment.
Date: 7/14/2020 2:00:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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James Inman
Date: 7/14/2020 9:16:00 AM
Thank you, Beata.
Date: 7/13/2020 10:25:00 AM
James a magnificent piece, worthy of 1st place. This should be judged on it its merit and skill level. It is not a spelling contest. I applaud this wonderful creation of yours and from reading the other impressive contestants, if I were judging, it would in all honesty would have given you the top honor. Be Blessed my friend...
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James Inman
Date: 7/13/2020 1:54:00 PM
Wow Michael, I'm sitting here chuckling. Thanks for the support but I will accept what Beth has chosen and her opinion. She was correct about the spelling and it is her contest so I will respect that. Thank you though.
Date: 7/12/2020 3:26:00 AM
Wow, really? Visually amazing piece, James, expressly well-done, my compliments on your efforts, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William
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James Inman
Date: 7/12/2020 11:12:00 AM
What a wonderful comment, thank you, William.
Date: 7/11/2020 1:54:00 PM
This one has some of the best imagery of all the winners I am seeing, Keep up your golden pen, Ralph, and Congrats to you.
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James Inman
Date: 7/11/2020 3:24:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you. I still have to read them.
Date: 7/11/2020 8:33:00 AM
I love the archaic sound of your creation, James. Congratulations.
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James Inman
Date: 7/11/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Jenna.
Date: 6/29/2020 12:49:00 PM
the noble quest for Wisdom....is Divine by any vision....enlightenment sets us free....inspiring the best that we can be....i Love this james....
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James Inman
Date: 6/29/2020 12:59:00 PM
Thank you again.
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