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Imprison Me

Beware the dark of azure twilight where lightning's arc will lure the sprite, their wings, so stark, like velour midnight, fair creature's that mark the allure of starlight. Share thy tongue sweet lark in pure delight. There, where spark of amour and passions ignite, fair, the heart will embark on seas of obscure rite; ensnare me, oh Plutarch, immure my soul with your insight. 06/28/2020 Triple Rhyme Poetry Contest Hosted by: Beth Evans

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Viv Wigley

Date: 10/3/2020 11:02:00 PM

Well woven, James, beautifully put together with a classic feel, congrats!

James Inman
Date: 10/4/2020 7:55:00 AM

Nice of you to visit Viv, hope things are well with you. Thanks for the nice comment.

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 7/18/2020 8:50:00 AM

Remarkable quadruple rhymes! One would think that ‘triple’ would be enough of a challenge. Congratulations! James.

James Inman
Date: 7/18/2020 9:51:00 AM

Thank you Geoffrey.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/16/2020 8:59:00 AM

Wow! This is not only full of metaphors but a gem with the artistic imagery James. Congratulations on your win. Blessings! :)

James Inman
Date: 7/16/2020 11:16:00 AM

Thank you for visiting Aditi and for the nice comment.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/14/2020 7:56:00 AM

Vividly descriptive, lovely, WINNING poem, James! Janice

James Inman
Date: 7/14/2020 9:18:00 AM

Hi Janice, I made it a quadruple rhyme just for the fun of it. Thanks for the nice comment.

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/14/2020 2:00:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

James Inman
Date: 7/14/2020 9:16:00 AM

Thank you, Beata.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/13/2020 10:25:00 AM

James a magnificent piece, worthy of 1st place. This should be judged on it its merit and skill level. It is not a spelling contest. I applaud this wonderful creation of yours and from reading the other impressive contestants, if I were judging, it would in all honesty would have given you the top honor. Be Blessed my friend...

James Inman
Date: 7/13/2020 1:54:00 PM

Wow Michael, I'm sitting here chuckling. Thanks for the support but I will accept what Beth has chosen and her opinion. She was correct about the spelling and it is her contest so I will respect that. Thank you though.