James Inman Poet Rhyme

Imprison Me

Beware the dark of azure twilight
where lightning's arc will lure the sprite,
their wings, so stark, like velour midnight,
fair creature's that mark the allure of starlight.

Share thy tongue sweet lark in pure delight.
There, where spark of amour and passions ignite,
fair, the heart will embark on seas of obscure rite;
ensnare me, oh Plutarch, immure my soul with your insight.


06/28/2020


Triple Rhyme Poetry Contest
Hosted by: Beth Evans

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Viv Wigley October 3, 2020 at 11:02 PM Well woven, James, beautifully put together with a classic feel, congrats! James Inman October 4, 2020 at 7:55 AM Nice of you to visit Viv, hope things are well with you. Thanks for the nice comment.

Geoffrey Brewer July 18, 2020 at 8:50 AM Remarkable quadruple rhymes! One would think that ‘triple’ would be enough of a challenge. Congratulations! James. James Inman July 18, 2020 at 9:51 AM Thank you Geoffrey.

Aditi Mishra July 16, 2020 at 8:59 AM Wow! This is not only full of metaphors but a gem with the artistic imagery James. Congratulations on your win. Blessings! :) James Inman July 16, 2020 at 11:16 AM Thank you for visiting Aditi and for the nice comment.

Janice Canerdy July 14, 2020 at 7:56 AM Vividly descriptive, lovely, WINNING poem, James! Janice James Inman July 14, 2020 at 9:18 AM Hi Janice, I made it a quadruple rhyme just for the fun of it. Thanks for the nice comment.

Beata Agustin July 14, 2020 at 2:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... in your awesome poetic style. God bless you. James Inman July 14, 2020 at 9:16 AM Thank you, Beata.

Michael Tor July 13, 2020 at 10:25 AM James a magnificent piece, worthy of 1st place. This should be judged on it its merit and skill level. It is not a spelling contest. I applaud this wonderful creation of yours and from reading the other impressive contestants, if I were judging, it would in all honesty would have given you the top honor. Be Blessed my friend... James Inman July 13, 2020 at 1:54 PM Wow Michael, I'm sitting here chuckling. Thanks for the support but I will accept what Beth has chosen and her opinion. She was correct about the spelling and it is her contest so I will respect that. Thank you though.

William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2020 at 3:26 AM Wow, really? Visually amazing piece, James, expressly well-done, my compliments on your efforts, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William James Inman July 12, 2020 at 11:12 AM What a wonderful comment, thank you, William.

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2020 at 1:54 PM This one has some of the best imagery of all the winners I am seeing, Keep up your golden pen, Ralph, and Congrats to you. James Inman July 11, 2020 at 3:24 PM Hi Andrea, thank you. I still have to read them.

Jenna Logan July 11, 2020 at 8:33 AM I love the archaic sound of your creation, James. Congratulations. James Inman July 11, 2020 at 3:23 PM Thank you Jenna.

Eric Boddie June 29, 2020 at 12:49 PM the noble quest for Wisdom....is Divine by any vision....enlightenment sets us free....inspiring the best that we can be....i Love this james.... James Inman June 29, 2020 at 12:59 PM Thank you again.