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Imprint of Sorrow

Amidst the solitude of empty pews in hallowed halls she took a seat and prayed she would not be forsaken. Candles lit, soft glow throwing shadows on the walls. Tear glistened cheeks, cries for all death had taken. In whispered breath she begged for her heart to mend, taking comfort in memories to free her from the gloom of misery so burdensome that she could not comprehend why the one she loved lay buried, sealed within a tomb. Fate's sting cuffed a cruel blow with its callous reach, leaving her heart stabbed deep enough to make it bleed. In supplication, she prayed for healing and to beseech, that in her time of need, "Merciful Father, please intercede." In her hand, a wilted rose; once a radiant crimson flower, its fragrance mingled with the scent of votives as they melt. No solace found; she left the darkness of that sullen hour. Remaining was the imprint of sorrow where she had knelt. She walked in moonlight, grieving for love, once savored, mourning, bereaved and lost in deep emotional despair. She sang a hymn with lips that trembled and quavered, mist falling on widow's weeds, she had the need to wear. December 19, 2020 A Rhyme Story-Poem with Eyes On Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 12/25/2020 10:48:00 PM
Absolutely outstanding work! Congrats on your win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/28/2020 5:50:00 AM
Thanks so much, Seeker.
Date: 12/25/2020 2:45:00 PM
Jenna, my warm Congratulations. Your poems are works of great skill. Reliably readers feel your depth of emotion. Here, as always, unafraid brilliant rhyme. I admire the thoughtful construction of your poem. A worthy Winner.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/28/2020 5:50:00 AM
Thank you for such generous comments, Sigrid.
Date: 12/24/2020 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A sad yet wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win and day with blessings......................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/25/2020 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, Paula.
Date: 12/23/2020 11:33:00 AM
Jenna, your words have brought to light the depth of sadness in grieving the loss of a loved one. Your image of the wilted rose is perfect! Congratulations on your win! Sending you Christmas blessings for a Merry Christmas!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/24/2020 5:47:00 AM
I'm so delighted to read your very generous comments. Thanks, Sam.
Date: 12/23/2020 9:47:00 AM
This is brilliant. I love it!!! God B L E S S you and Merry Christmas and CONGRATS on your top placement :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/24/2020 5:46:00 AM
Thanks an awful lot for the congrats, Regina.
Date: 12/23/2020 8:58:00 AM
A beautiful take to your lovely poem Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2020 9:13:00 AM
Thanks an awful lot, Carol.
Date: 12/23/2020 7:37:00 AM
Great written story, Jenna, congratulations on your 4th place win. Hugs Eve
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2020 9:13:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve.
Date: 12/23/2020 5:55:00 AM
No greater grief then losing your dying love, your words touched me deeply dear Jenna. Well written and perfectly rhymed, I loved it. Congratulations on your placement. Thank you for joining my contest, love and light, your Mystic R.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2020 9:13:00 AM
Thank you for the honor, Mystic Rose.
Date: 12/20/2020 2:07:00 AM
Sadness definitely brings out beauty in poetry, Jenna, and you have done that with a masterly rendition. Your natural rhyme is excellent. I will certainly see this entry flying high! Regards // paul
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/20/2020 4:01:00 AM
Paul, your comments are so encouraging. Thank you for each wonderful one you've offered. They're all appreciated.
Date: 12/19/2020 11:31:00 PM
When you rhyme,it's so divine.Your free verse is so diverse. Ain't no trick to write a limerick.Your acrostics are hypnotic. What imagination with alliteration. Your villanelle sure is swell. Couplets Quintain Monoku. Sonnets Dizain Dodoitsu. Lyric Cinquain and Haiku. You have no peer at what you do. Shakespeare would be proud of you! Jenna Logan. MASTER POET!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/20/2020 4:00:00 AM
I guess now I'll have to write in all of those forms. lol. Seriously, Joe...thanks for your thoughts.
Date: 12/19/2020 2:38:00 PM
This is beautiful, Jenna, though very sad. I, too, sometimes cry for "all death has taken." I'm hoping her faith can save her. An extraordinary poem and a fave for me. Have a wonderful holiday season, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/20/2020 3:59:00 AM
Thank you for such generous remarks and the fave, Carolyn. The picture provided set the mood. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 12/19/2020 7:33:00 AM
Very well written Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/19/2020 10:14:00 AM
Thank you for reading and leaving a comment, Mark.

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