Impressions of Fall

rainstorm ushers in final day of October blustery winds of catastrophic new season fell leaves enshroud the damp earth 10/31/2019
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Date: 11/2/2019 2:32:00 PM
The last line means ever so much!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 6:16:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 11/2/2019 12:51:00 PM
In my area heavy showers stopped at last. This year rainy season came late and and continued long. Love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 6:17:00 AM
We wait for it...then it comes furiously!
Date: 11/2/2019 7:35:00 AM
it wont stop raining here!!! I worry about the bulbs ive planted... oh well... nice tanka..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 6:17:00 AM
Hope your bulbs survive! Thank you, Silent!
Date: 11/1/2019 2:39:00 PM
Very nicely penned Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 4:43:00 PM
Thanks, Charles!
Date: 11/1/2019 7:09:00 AM
Wonderfully done Kim. I loved this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)
Date: 11/1/2019 6:38:00 AM
'fell leaves enshroud the damp earth', a joyous sensation it brings forth ... Lovely brevity ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/1/2019 5:08:00 AM
Fallen leaves, a wet compress for the exuberant patient. Dr. Winter has already prescribed him a white straitjacket. But soon the earth will break free) Your tankas are great. Love'em.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thank you, Kurt! Great poetic comment!
Date: 11/1/2019 4:44:00 AM
Wonderful... Bless you, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thank you, Regina! Bless you too <3
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