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Impressions of Fall

rainstorm ushers in final day of October blustery winds of catastrophic new season fell leaves enshroud the damp earth 10/31/2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/2/2019 2:32:00 PM

The last line means ever so much!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 6:16:00 AM

Thanks!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/2/2019 12:51:00 PM

In my area heavy showers stopped at last. This year rainy season came late and and continued long. Love.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 6:17:00 AM

We wait for it...then it comes furiously!

Silent One

Date: 11/2/2019 7:35:00 AM

it wont stop raining here!!! I worry about the bulbs ive planted... oh well... nice tanka..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 6:17:00 AM

Hope your bulbs survive! Thank you, Silent!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 2:39:00 PM

Very nicely penned Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 4:43:00 PM

Thanks, Charles!

Chris Green

Date: 11/1/2019 7:09:00 AM

Wonderfully done Kim. I loved this.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 7:40:00 AM

Thank you, Chris! :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/1/2019 6:38:00 AM

'fell leaves enshroud the damp earth', a joyous sensation it brings forth ... Lovely brevity ...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 7:40:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 11/1/2019 5:08:00 AM

Fallen leaves, a wet compress for the exuberant patient. Dr. Winter has already prescribed him a white straitjacket. But soon the earth will break free) Your tankas are great. Love'em.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, Kurt! Great poetic comment!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/1/2019 4:44:00 AM

Wonderful... Bless you, Gina

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2019 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, Regina! Bless you too <3