Impressions of Fall

rainstorm ushers in final day of October blustery winds of catastrophic new season fell leaves enshroud the damp earth 10/31/2019
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Krutsinger Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 2:32 PM
The last line means ever so much!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 6:16 AM
Thanks!
Dutta Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 12:51 PM
In my area heavy showers stopped at last. This year rainy season came late and and continued long. Love.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 6:17 AM
We wait for it...then it comes furiously!
One Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 7:35 AM
it wont stop raining here!!! I worry about the bulbs ive planted... oh well... nice tanka..
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 6:17 AM
Hope your bulbs survive! Thank you, Silent!
Messina Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Very nicely penned Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 4:43 PM
Thanks, Charles!
Green Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 7:09 AM
Wonderfully done Kim. I loved this.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 7:40 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)
Gupta Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 6:38 AM
'fell leaves enshroud the damp earth', a joyous sensation it brings forth ... Lovely brevity ...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 7:40 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Ravidas Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 5:08 AM
Fallen leaves, a wet compress for the exuberant patient. Dr. Winter has already prescribed him a white straitjacket. But soon the earth will break free) Your tankas are great. Love'em.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Thank you, Kurt! Great poetic comment!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 4:44 AM
Wonderful... Bless you, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Thank you, Regina! Bless you too <3
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