Impotent Moon

Hell awaits the night of the eclipse
Til the moon betrays the tides
It tells the waves to rise and awake
But tonight, the moon simply hides

The stars watch the flames in torment
As the smoke impedes their view
The sea stays silent and helpless
For the moon tells it not what to do

Blinded by darkness, no saviour is found
For the hero knows not what to save
Impotent, the moon thinks all is well
By faith, it commands not the waves

The lava is tirelessly reaching out
Trying to give new land its birth
But to bring forth its life, death must be found
As hell's fury is unleashed on earth

As the ocean sits in quiet frustration
The Heaven's cannot make a sound
The earth begs the sea for mercy
But no solace will ever be found

The moon that's been locked in darkness
Cries, as it watches earth's fate
For the eclipse is releasing its blindfold
But the hero has entered too late
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 12:35 PM
Larry, this is superb take on the picture in Paula's contest and a joy to read >> James
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations, you did awesome! LUv, andrea
Richards Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Wow...Congratulations, Larry...on this amazing view of the picture!! Great job, and well deserving a win! Well done!! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 8:00 PM
Big congrats Larry on your 1st place win in Blind Faith contest.. this is a spectacular poem.. enjoy your great victory...with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Taylor Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Very descriptive, Larry. Great job. Good luck. Ralph
Mehta Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 3:49 AM
I love the last four lines summing up your thoughts. Good luck
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