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Impotent Moon

Hell awaits the night of the eclipse
Til the moon betrays the tides
It tells the waves to rise and awake
But tonight, the moon simply hides

The stars watch the flames in torment
As the smoke impedes their view
The sea stays silent and helpless
For the moon tells it not what to do

Blinded by darkness, no saviour is found
For the hero knows not what to save
Impotent, the moon thinks all is well
By faith, it commands not the waves

The lava is tirelessly reaching out
Trying to give new land its birth
But to bring forth its life, death must be found
As hell's fury is unleashed on earth

As the ocean sits in quiet frustration
The Heaven's cannot make a sound
The earth begs the sea for mercy
But no solace will ever be found

The moon that's been locked in darkness
Cries, as it watches earth's fate
For the eclipse is releasing its blindfold
But the hero has entered too late

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/25/2010 12:35:00 PM
Larry, this is superb take on the picture in Paula's contest and a joy to read >> James
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Date: 5/25/2010 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations, you did awesome! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/24/2010 8:52:00 PM
Wow...Congratulations, Larry...on this amazing view of the picture!! Great job, and well deserving a win! Well done!! :)
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Date: 5/24/2010 8:00:00 PM
Big congrats Larry on your 1st place win in Blind Faith contest.. this is a spectacular poem.. enjoy your great victory...with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/23/2010 12:36:00 PM
Very descriptive, Larry. Great job. Good luck. Ralph
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:49:00 AM
I love the last four lines summing up your thoughts. Good luck
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