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Impossibilities

Reach out into the realm of impossibilities reach in and feel something so real a heart beckoning reckoning for a chance to live, to breathe, to believe holding in nothing holding out hope and a helping hand knowing good still has a fighting chance that daylight always rises stars seem to shine brightest with open eyes and love still carries home a welcome smile

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 5/11/2017 8:51:00 AM

Humans are the only creatures that reach out for impossibilities. Personally I find this strange, given all the possibilities life offers us. Enjoyed your poem. Many thanks for stopping by to read my limerick. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/9/2017 11:03:00 AM

Good will Always have a fighting chance when one let it in (and that is holding onto hope). That last line says so much. NICE Tim :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/9/2017 5:42:00 AM

Good Morning Tim. This is beautifully stated and expressed. In short the real of impossibilities as you say truly is possibilities. This is a little gem of worth. Have a wonderful morning. Well done

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/8/2017 10:42:00 PM

I love the message of your poem; good is still worth fighting for, you can make a difference in this world . . . be willing to take a chance:) Amitiés

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/8/2017 10:21:00 PM

Now thats uplifting, I only wish I could I could feel such sentiments :(

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2017 6:02:00 PM

Wonderful, Tim, Simply wonderful.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/8/2017 3:49:00 PM

Awesome poem Tim . I love it :)

Darren White

Date: 5/8/2017 2:44:00 PM

Stars shine brightest when you need them the most. Good still exists, friendship too, and so does love. And so do smiles :) Beautiful poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2017 2:34:00 PM

- Nothing is impossible ... it's about making the right choice - Love is after all very strong, Tim - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/8/2017 2:20:00 PM

Indeed the good one will always win in the end..Even when He seems like a loser...He is at peace with himself...A fantastic poem Tim.Its a challenge to be good..but what a lovely challenge.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/8/2017 2:27:00 PM

I wish there would be less negative and more positive in this world. I believe we should highlight the good more often...thanks Charma

Chris Green

Date: 5/8/2017 1:04:00 PM

Good will always have a fighting chance if it has love on its side. Nicely done Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 5/8/2017 1:07:00 PM

Thanks Chris I sure hope it stays that way