Imposing Beauty Unseen By Mortals

Fragrance in garden. Memories of fresh plowed earth. Ghost of ancient planters plant. Seeds that bloom in spring. Burst forth in magnificence. No eyes to behold grandeur. Gone from this garden. Where once fellowship had been. Made to leave because of sin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 10:13 AM
Powerful writing, Marty. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Love, Lainie
Culverhouse Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 4:19 PM
great message in this poem, I love it!!
Sweetheart Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 8:59 AM
Powerful and most beautiful words, Marty, luv your title too..something to think about.. on this snowy day in N.J.... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie "Sweetie"
Chircop Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 11:30 AM
So beautiful for my eyes is this garden,so sweet is the scent--Charma
Canady Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 2:50 AM
I Love This One Marty ... Beautiful Scene In A Story, Which Made The Ending, Even More Potent ... Going Into My Fav's ... What A Great Read To Start My Early Day ... MoonBee
Kendrick Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 2:41 PM
Interesting write here kinda an unexpected finish. Nicely done. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
Pickett Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 7:45 AM
Nice word-play friend... Keep em comin'......:JP]
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