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Oh, my Lord, Is there a time in Your divine plans: That righteous hearts, mutinous will become For The injustices of this tormented world, to Chase away? That love and compassion will join forces For To overcome indifference and hate? That tears of pain and desperation will end For Laughter and hope to have their say? That the present enemies stop fighting each-other For To give themselves the chance friends to become? That peace will reign all over Your dominion, For Finally, united this world to be? If the answer is, YES, my Lord, I implore You: Let this time TODAY start and let it last for All ETERNITY! © Demetrios Trifiatis 27 January 2021

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Michael Tor

Date: 1/27/2021 8:30:00 PM

Amen my friend. Hoping it is soon Demetrios. God bless you...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/28/2021 11:40:00 AM

Yes, my dearest friend, Michael! Let us work and pray so this day comes! Blessing! Thank you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/27/2021 5:10:00 AM

I join you my friend in your solemn prayer. Lovely flower.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/27/2021 7:38:00 AM

Thank you for caring, my dearest friend, Vijay! Let all of us pray for that day to come! God bless you!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/27/2021 5:01:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, You have penned such a heartfelt prayer. I too hope and pray for a day such as this. I am hopeful that it will come soon:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/27/2021 7:36:00 AM

Alexis, my dearest, always a pleasure to see you! Thank you very much! Hugs xxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/27/2021 3:27:00 AM

A beautiful vision Demetrios, that all mankind would enjoy, lets hope and pray that it becomes reality for those coming up behind us. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/27/2021 7:35:00 AM

Yes, my dearest friend, Tom! A vision that all humanity is dreaming of! Let us all work towards that day! Thank you very much for your lovely visit and comment!

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 1/27/2021 2:28:00 AM

Amen to this! May this day arrive as soon as possible. Well said prayer!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/27/2021 7:30:00 AM

So good to see you again, dear friend, Kudjay! Thank you for your kind visit and comment!