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Impermanence

IMPERMANENCE


Nothing seems to last more than a blink
From seconds to  millennia - just think: 

Sunsets   most fleeting
Chocolate you are eating
Ice-cubes in coke  (or lemon-and-lime )
Mascara in the rain runs faster than time
Cherry blossom, soft, pink, falling
Indian summers whose end is galling
Teenage girls' crushes on  the football squad
Rap music  ( almost gone now, thank God )
Narrow waistlines (without  cheating)
Crude oil reserves  which we are greedily eating
Troy, city of fabled towers
Pyramids, symbols of earthly powers
Mountains  always eroding to the sea
Stars  so dim we can’t really see.
Waterfalls, Montmorency or Niagara
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Don’t  rely  on any of  these things
They will fly with the swiftest wings.


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NOTE

As the poem progresses, the lifespan of items
increases, (with the exception of the final item of course),
but all are limited.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/22/2011 7:41:00 AM
Even more so...in the age we live in....we are a demanding, and indulged society...instant gratification seems to be all that matters!
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Date: 5/21/2011 8:59:00 PM
Syd, the older we get, the faster time seems to fly. Yes, the mountains erode and one day even the pyramids will be gone. Very thought-provoking poem, my friend. Wouldn't it be nice to travel forward in time and see what changes have occurred in the world we know today? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2011 11:47:00 PM
Carolyn, Thank you for reading my poem and enjoying...you asked about the future which is a very interesting idea....I also wrote a poem called ARCHAEOLOGY FIELD-TRIP JANUARY 29 TH 3011 - ( PART I and PART II )....and it deals with the future of the San Francisco Bay area as if students in 3011 were studying it...you may like it...I hope so...best wishes as always...Syd
Date: 5/21/2011 7:23:00 PM
this was great! good job nice flow.. cory
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Date: 5/21/2011 7:17:00 PM
Dear Syd- Appreciate this form of imagery-there are so many things that lack permanence in your nicely written poem. From the trivial to the not-so-trivial things included. I believe the greeedily eaten oil is a winning line as well as the last 2 sets of rhyming lines. Appreciate reading this mind bending write. Gwendolen
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