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Impermanence

IMPERMANENCE Nothing seems to last more than a blink From seconds to millennia - just think: Sunsets most fleeting Chocolate you are eating Ice-cubes in coke (or lemon-and-lime ) Mascara in the rain runs faster than time Cherry blossom, soft, pink, falling Indian summers whose end is galling Teenage girls' crushes on the football squad Rap music ( almost gone now, thank God ) Narrow waistlines (without cheating) Crude oil reserves which we are greedily eating Troy, city of fabled towers Pyramids, symbols of earthly powers Mountains always eroding to the sea Stars so dim we can’t really see. Waterfalls, Montmorency or Niagara Sexual potency without viagra Don’t rely on any of these things They will fly with the swiftest wings. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . NOTE As the poem progresses, the lifespan of items increases, (with the exception of the final item of course), but all are limited.

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Date: 5/22/2011 7:41:00 AM
Even more so...in the age we live in....we are a demanding, and indulged society...instant gratification seems to be all that matters!
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Date: 5/21/2011 8:59:00 PM
Syd, the older we get, the faster time seems to fly. Yes, the mountains erode and one day even the pyramids will be gone. Very thought-provoking poem, my friend. Wouldn't it be nice to travel forward in time and see what changes have occurred in the world we know today? Love, Carolyn
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Sidney Beck
Date: 5/21/2011 11:47:00 PM
Carolyn, Thank you for reading my poem and enjoying...you asked about the future which is a very interesting idea....I also wrote a poem called ARCHAEOLOGY FIELD-TRIP JANUARY 29 TH 3011 - ( PART I and PART II )....and it deals with the future of the San Francisco Bay area as if students in 3011 were studying it...you may like it...I hope so...best wishes as always...Syd
Date: 5/21/2011 7:23:00 PM
this was great! good job nice flow.. cory
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Date: 5/21/2011 7:17:00 PM
Dear Syd- Appreciate this form of imagery-there are so many things that lack permanence in your nicely written poem. From the trivial to the not-so-trivial things included. I believe the greeedily eaten oil is a winning line as well as the last 2 sets of rhyming lines. Appreciate reading this mind bending write. Gwendolen
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