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The Imperial Forest reigns supreme. In the land I woke up, I got up from my dream. Dawn breaks with silvery turning to golden. Starlight sharpens while day looks olden.  I see the world reflected inside the water. Tossed back to me, waves give the stalker. A dawn treat comes in the form of a cloud. To fit their disguise, they alter the crowd. White memory becomes gold over time. The moments in life are very sublime. I never care what some people say. I will die when it`s time for me to die. Just let me and I'll go with the flow. Here's hoping for a brighter tomorrow.
Written: July 15, 2022

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Date: 7/16/2022 8:13:00 AM
I love your beautiful imagery, Lasaad. Seems to be like a bio of yourself to me. Peaceful and emcouraging, always looking for the bright side of life. :-) I enjoyed this so much I made it a FAV. Have a great day my friend! Bill
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Date: 7/16/2022 6:58:00 AM
I like your poem and the message of ending lines: Just let me and I'll go with the flow. Here's hoping for a brighter tomorrow.
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Date: 7/15/2022 9:38:00 PM
Love this poem of hope and sunshine. As long as as we live enjoying life, death is not something to be dreaded. Live in hope of a better tomorrow. Say goodbye with no regrets when time comes ! Great writing !
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Date: 7/15/2022 8:03:00 PM
Love his, Lasaad, such a wonderful dream, also the mind set that created it..
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Date: 7/15/2022 3:47:00 PM
We all pray for this " brighter tomorrow " my dearest friend, Lasaad but not many of us work for it to be realized. Beautifully done, Blessings!
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Date: 7/15/2022 12:16:00 PM
Hello Lassad ,yes letrs hope for a brighter tomorrow. It is needed. Enjoy your day my friend.
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