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Imperfection

Washed adrift, unable to reach the floating shoreline, Lost in a sea of bitter loneliness. Saline-soaked clothes stick to weary bones. You become just a mere mirage under the intensifying sun. Parched lips quiver, Yet no tears can escape splintering eyes. Lungs burn with every stroke of exhausted arms. How much longer can I keep myself afloat? I haven’t slept in what feels like eons, Yet I can’t be sure, as these endless days merge with delusional nights. No longer can I hold onto the hope that your love will see me, Save me from drowning in an unforgiving abyss. Eventually, the suffering will become unbearable, And my blistered skin will sink, Whilst my body finds its watery grave within the Twilight Zone. All because I failed to see that your heart was replaced with calcified sulfur so long ago.

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Date: 3/6/2025 8:06:00 PM
Powerful write, Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 3/5/2025 4:00:00 AM
Wonderful poem. I’m glad I was able to place you well. Do try my next contest.
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Sara Jama
Date: 3/5/2025 12:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for placing me in your contest. I appreciate it.
Date: 2/17/2025 4:08:00 PM
This is extreme physical manifestation of emotional states, it underscores the need for a holistic approach, perhaps in the next life? The imagery out of this world!
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Sara Jama
Date: 3/5/2025 12:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my work. I see the poem in my head and the imagery just spills out.
Date: 2/14/2025 9:24:00 AM
Interesting work. Thanks for sharing. Sara K..soupmail soon.
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Sara Jama
Date: 3/5/2025 12:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading.
Date: 2/8/2025 8:47:00 AM
Grumpy, sounds like one that is a depiction of splitting due to lack of sleep( and exhaustion, youv written one that is so deeply emotive with such clever and excellent wordplay! Made me wonder( how long did it take for you to write this? I bet not more than 15 minutes haha! Knowing you!!! I love the most the last two lines how you mentioned twilight zone and also the ending is soul hitting! Powerful poem! Well delivered! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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Sara Jama
Date: 3/5/2025 12:40:00 PM
Thank you so much ink for all the continued support. Yep you are probably right with the 15 minutes. Lol. And yes I love the different levels of the ocean alot.
Date: 2/8/2025 7:42:00 AM
Ooh salinated dehydration, extreme physical presentation of an emotional state. Well composed.
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Sara Jama
Date: 3/5/2025 12:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my work. I truly appreciate it.

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